To You, Random Stranger
By ColorMeToxic
http://youtu.be/NfOb6hwGffU
I wish I could bottle up
all the bad things in your head
and throw them into
an ocean so vast
that they will forever be lost,
forever be floating,
unable to hurt another living soul.
I wish I could mend your heart,
without leaving jagged scars
and gaps
where your pain was.
Scars that would forever remind you
of the life you've lived
and of all the people you miss.
I wish I could take your eyes
and instill in them, the light
that should never have disappeared
in the first place,
so that you may always see
a glimmer of hope,
that beam of happiness
that your eyes have been void of for years.
I wish I could collect all of your tears,
past, present, and future,
and use them to nourish gardens,
massive enough to feed
all of the world's hungry.
Most of all, I wish I could tell you,
I love you,
in such a way...
that you'll never doubt,
that at least one person cares.
Author's Note:
I guess I just wish I had the power to change the world...Awards
Comments on "To You, Random Stranger"
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A former member wrote:
This really did deserve poem of the day. It was great.
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On Saturday, November 7, 2015, Star
(879) wrote:
Congrats! I loved this much. A well deserving award for such an amazing piece!
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On Saturday, November 7, 2015, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Congratulations love! A well deserving spot indeed. -Bows and applauds
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On Saturday, November 7, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
I also liked you YouTube channel - enjoyed your video version of this. Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, October 22, 2015, rwb35
(64) wrote:
Since you commented on mine, I randomly picked one of yours and it was just what I needed to hear. A very good read, filled with emotion and hope at the end
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On Wednesday, June 3, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
This is a beautiful piece, I particularly loved the notion of watering gardens with their tears and casting their hurt into the ocean where they will be "unable to hurt another living soul." Wonderful! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely gorgeous. I'm very thankful to have had the opportunity to have read this great piece, it speaks to me on so many levels just lovely. Thanks again
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A former member wrote:
I guess the complexity of the worlds issues and depression in others can sometimes leave us feeling helpless. I liked the mix of sincerity, helplessness and inspiration you conveyed. Good write.
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On Saturday, July 19, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
I'm in love with every word. Such a profound image lingering within my mind. I just... I love you to pieces!
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A former member wrote:
wow, that's some powerful imagery there, I could picture you doing these things as i read your poem. Your flow has a good flow rhythm and rhyme, this could easily be a song-Mrk
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On Tuesday, March 5, 2013, breezesblue
(4) wrote:
very uplifting read....great work...tyvm
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On Wednesday, August 22, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(428) wrote:
I share this feeling with you. You have the power to help others, you would be a good psychologist, someone who help others with their inner pain.
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A former member wrote:
This is EXACTLY I feel.. I don't know whats with all the negativity in today's generation. Great poem, and the poet who wrote this is a great human being. I needed this! Thank You! Keep writing!
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A former member wrote:
Calming and lovely. (: Your work is amazing as always.
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On Monday, March 26, 2012, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
This is beautiful Beth, you can change the world, one person at a time. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece =)
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A former member wrote:
i love you too
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2012, veingo
(526) wrote:
I really needed something to bring a smile, and a little warmth tonight. This was the perfect read to do just that. Thank you, dear. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
this is so much you Beth. this could be called "Beth". Bongo nailed it "empath" indeed..bows.
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A former member wrote:
All that for a total stranger? Powerful imagry and emotions there.
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On Sunday, December 18, 2011, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
No trench is too deep, no sea is too wide, the current and oceans have something to hide. If you find a bottle spacious enough, tell me there are more, I have my own things to set adrift. Thank you as usual Beth.
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On Sunday, December 18, 2011, darkness falls
(73) wrote:
I wish someone thought of me that way. Isn't that what we all wish for? Thanks for putting it into words.
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On Saturday, December 17, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Sometimes the world is too much with us (Shakespeare?). Anyway, I took this on a more personal level of partnership and past lives. Things that have passed beyond control or intervention, just because, they once vwere and always will be. Thanks CMT for this thoughtful piece.
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On Saturday, December 17, 2011, Gemini
(31) wrote:
The world would be a better place indeed.
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On Saturday, December 17, 2011, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
Wow, this is so beautiful, and so sad, but beautiful!!
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On Saturday, December 17, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Awe.. That's beautiful.. Like you.. You snap me out of a strange world into a good one...