A Simple, Starless Night

By lupus tenebrae


In dreaming, the sky is thick, grey with a
vaporous granite; yet it’s
simply a starless night

stealing a halogen phantom
from an ember’s dying glow.

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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Tuesday, June 11, 2013.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

More observation, to perhaps break the ice.
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  • A former member wrote: I agree with haunted...each time I read this I can visualize an entirely different scenario - each one awe-inspiring.

  • haunted On Wednesday, June 12, 2013, haunted (1190)By person wrote:

    that is really cool, the more I read the deeper and profound your message gets, but I read it differently slightly each time I did. its fascinating and this is what poetry is all about in my eyes. excellent lupus!

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