my pretend lover
By FadedBlues
I love your
hair when it's short & red
I pull it gently when it's long & black
when it's Harlow blonde, you devour me
I know you in all your
brilliant colors
in lace & silk, in cashmere & coarse denim
and
gloriously, repeatedly, freshly bathed skin
in the softest blue moonlight
your fragrance tickles and teases my olfactory channels
dusty
roses, dandelion smoke
rain forest votive candles, and peaches in
season
your vocal vibrations are whispers of the wind
the
trill of the robin, and, at precipitous times,
the rasp of the indiscreet
foghorn
as you announce news of breakfast
sing of an auric
love
or leave a hymn of farewell
(there's always 'farewell')
you are there throughout the sky
and in each billowing cloud
trembling between drops of rain
in the steamy mirror
and ever
seductive, in the tangled sheets
transcender of time, your face
is always beautiful
and you have many names
Awards
Comments on "my pretend lover"
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On Thursday, April 23, 2015, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
This was fun to write, & fun to pretend...
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On Thursday, April 23, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Also fun to read. : ) Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Mmm a feast for the senses..loved the fast pace imagery..very intoxicating write
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On Wednesday, January 16, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
Things aren't always pretend... there will be one and only one that can satisfy that fire in ways others cannot, whether it be a dirty lil whore, a slave girl, or a true love... there is always one willing to do anything for that one person....
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A former member wrote:
Sensual n beautiful..... amazing work Faded! Thanks for sharing.
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A former member wrote:
What a romantic writer you are. Your woman is lucky to have you. I love the line your vocal vibrations are whispers of the wind grate write I be reading more of you. Oh and thank you for your comment on my poem.
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Thanks, Ladies, you're all 'transcenders', you're always beautiful..
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Star
(879) wrote:
beautiful dear... beautiful.. (:
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
And I don't care what day it is what time it is when I get an email you posted I stop what ever it is i'm doing and log on cause I know your gonna be worth it.
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
My god you have me slobbering at your feet. Like aweeeeeeeeeee the best climax in the world you give them everytime. my god. i swear i put my face in my left hand sitting indian style with my right finger dropping the lines down as I stare as though i'm hypmotized til the end then sigh and gether myself for the comment..lol. damn you . lol. now theres a visual for you . making the devil feel human.
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Having a visual mind is a blessing at times and a curse at others. Beautiful write and great tribute to fantastical muses, I hope you pull my hair at least once ;) - XXOO
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
What a scrumptious read this morning...simply lovely. lucky girl she is.
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On Sunday, August 26, 2012, sexxykiller14
(38) wrote:
nice. no other way to describe it. very creative.