Comments by Invisible Girl

"Mr Lonelyâ€¦.I remember him from a poem not too long ago.. lol We all hope to be thought of in this way. Well done..leaves a reader longing for love"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "star, burning slowly" by FadedBlues

" Odd how the desperate situation here has an edge of strength to it.. I like how you did that"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "LIFE ON THE STREETS" by infinitebeing

"the truth will set you free.. loved this one- I can relate to it.It was my quest- to find my personal truth and to live authentically. "
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Deception" by Nehema

"Your words did what no other poem has done for me. Today I read this post and I cried. This is the love that broken hearts need. This is true. This is beautiful. Thank you for it. Sincerely."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "tapfere Madchen" by FadedBlues

"One of your better writes for sure! I love the end.. It's perfect. Brutally beautiful."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Spasmodic Heart" by Melancholic VIncent

"Awesome. I have said it before- I will say it again... you have stories in you that would make great episodes or short stories.. your details take the reader there"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "L.one.LY" by FadedBlues

"I do love the dark and twisty of this... Do the stairs on the tower of madness travel up or down... And does one know which direction he is going when climbing??? Hmmm"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "The Tower of Madness" by Melancholic VIncent

"You see her for what she is... and who she is. You are better. The demons you have created are a way to survive.. but you, my friend, are going to rise higher. You will be a light for others who live with the same hell. You will be a demon hunter of the mind. Freeing yourself and others from the ghosts in their heads. An intellectual who will be educated and also holds the trump card of experience. I have faith in you to become someone great. ...btw- the last line is bullshit...just saying..lol well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Motherless Abomination" by Melancholic VIncent

"Damn.. This is good..really good. Well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Everything" by IAmNorge

"Looking back...a dangerous perspective indeed. Instead- look forward. Take the lessons learned and apply them in your future. Love is out there waiting for you to collide with it. A heartfelt write "
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Loveless. " by IAmNorge

"Ouch.... Made me feel the pain in this write. Well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "too many women" by FadedBlues

"oh yeah... I feel ya! Nice post. Thought provoking for sure."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Unambiguous" by Nehema

"this leaves a sadness in its wake.."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "girl at a train station" by FadedBlues

"wow... a deep introspective look into one's self... not many of us truly know our authentic self. It took quite a journey for me to find mine. It is freedom once you discover it. A freedom I wish for the both of you- my beautiful friends."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Veiled Facade ~feat VesicaPiscis~" by Nehema

"The pit bull with the over sized heart...."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Preying for Solace..." by SilentStalker

"yes... very sexy...much enjoyed. well done"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "The glimpse of her panties" by Stephanie Sideways

"Hey Stephanie- welcome to DP- you will find amazing people here, and see how writing in shades of darkness can be wonderful therapy. Hope to read more from you"
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Hello Dark Poetry. Its me" by Stephanie Sideways

"You are a wonderful storyteller... however close to the truth it may be...your words bite and make a mark. No silly veils to hide behind- just tell it like it is. I love your words. Well done my friend."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "Storyteller" by Nehema

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