cruel curve

By blue angel

You are the fire that burns inside
and the sting of tears in an endless night
You are the cruel curve of a twisted smile
and the torture of too many miles
You are the uncertainty of forever
but when your eyes meet mine
I feel the swift kiss of a different kind

- a ravenous bite; a shiver to spine
and Darling, I'm pleased you're mine!

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Copyright 2018 blue angel
Published on Tuesday, April 24, 2018.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

under the spell
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  • Peyton1 On Sunday, January 21, 2024, Peyton1 (205)By person wrote:

    The ancient Crafted book from whence this spell was invoked, has been long sought by many. If you still possess it, might you tear out a page of its magic for me to cast? Not sure you'll even see this post miss Kendra, but know that you are dearly missed....................................................~hotrod~

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, March 19, 2023, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    This was deliciously superb. So very well done.

  • Shaded_Iris On Thursday, June 27, 2019, Shaded_Iris (82)By person wrote:

    Intriguing. I do like this piece. The mystery is the enticing part.

  • FadedBlues On Monday, November 19, 2018, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...'Do a line across my spine,' she once said; this curves into a temptable beauty, Angel...

  • Commander_Cadaver On Wednesday, October 3, 2018, Commander_Cadaver (233)By person wrote:

    That is quite the spell to be under.

  • Divine hell On Sunday, July 1, 2018, Divine hell (238)By person wrote:

    Simply beautiful thanks for sharing

  • Jonas Robinson On Wednesday, June 6, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    Simple life pleasures can have eternal darkness within them.

  • Deathkitten On Wednesday, May 2, 2018, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Ahem...writing about me again? Lovely pen. Brings back some good ole memories. Sparks doth fly, above us, above the sky. Loved it!

  • blue angel On Thursday, May 3, 2018, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Wicked grins for you, Kitten... a night alit in flames, elicits embers as rain.

  • I IS ME On Wednesday, April 25, 2018, I IS ME (380)By person wrote:

    This makes us remember, go and then no stay, confusing clarity. haha

  • dwells On Wednesday, April 25, 2018, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Everything is a trade-off BA and so good to see you posting again my friend! Cheers and welcome home - Dan

  • SolApathy On Tuesday, April 24, 2018, SolApathy (652)By person wrote:

    Under the spell of Hell...Pleasure of perfect measure of torture incarnate...If only this was my fate... --Stunning write

  • Adagios On Tuesday, April 24, 2018, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    Poignant, and very satisfying in so few words. Deep bows

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