Comments by carlosjackal

"Superb work and that finale caught me by surprise. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Perfect Poem" by TheBardOfBlasphemy

""After a while it doesn't matter if you can prove it or not The life that you lived It isn't you any longer anyway"....BAM! Knockout punch in the first three lines. When I bookmarked this work all that time ago, I didn't have the words so I let the bookmark do all the talking. These words still don't do this piece justice or convey exactly how much I love this work and all your works. Absolute treasure. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "Swallowing the sword" by cadymae

"Man, this poem is so fucking amazing, I can't even begin to explain why. You are so underrated on this site it drives me nuts!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "She watches and lives." by cadymae

"This was like Lewis Carroll possessed by the demons of Edgar Allan Poe."
Posted by carlosjackal on "1000 Journals In Schizophrenic Ink" by Electric-Chair

"Fear of the unknown, the mystery of magnificence so great, the thought of the merest detail being revealed is pure horror show. So much to chew on with this piece. Great stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Omne ignotum pro magnifico " by TropicalSnowstorm

"I really liked this and it's an excellent entry. So very well worked and stitched together."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Broken Hearted's Anthem (Rose's Greatest Hits)" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"Absolutely beautiful piece. Every line is crisp and wonderfully crafted. The way you take the haiku form and make it entirely your own is nothing short of fantastic. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "In Gardens Of Grief." by TheProphetUntold

"I went to bookmark this but can't find the bookmark icon hidden anywhere. Nevertheless, this is 100% killer with a lovely lilting and soft wonderful tone. And that enjambment on, "No soft piano/ raindrops on my worn rooftop": Silent Dynamite."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Quiet, Just Quiet." by TheProphetUntold

"Deceptively short but layered with multiplicity all delivered with a brilliant succinctness. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "I" by Phalanx

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