Comments by carlosjackal

  • ""After a while it doesn't matter if you can prove it or not The life that you lived It isn't you any longer anyway"....BAM! Knockout punch in the first three lines. When I bookmarked this work all that time ago, I didn't have the words so I let the bookmark do all the talking. These words still don't do this piece justice or convey exactly how much I love this work and all your works. Absolute treasure. "
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Swallowing the sword" by cadymae
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