distant voices {w.blue angel}

By FadedBlues


another meal is served, & I force it down. it'll do,
I guess. but I long for the country fried chicken on
Sundays after services, & the woman who served it
to me, then kissed me gentle on the cheek.

Meekly, I flip the hourglass and helplessly watch the sands
of time slip through the narrow path design. He has left me
here to figure out life's vague, vicious riddles and all those sins
just taunt and drag their dirty little hands across my skin.

I figured I'd always be with her in that little white
house, wake up with her to a sunny dawn each day.
but sometimes a man strays from the heavenly path,
and if you do your sins, you got your penance to pay.

The silence of this house is deafening today
driving me further into the dark corners of madness.
His voice still methodically dances through my mind with
all those shattering little lies that I choose to harbor.

looking out my prison bars tonight, I see that big cream pie
moon. she watches it too, & I can touch her like there is no
space between us. sweet memories flood, & so do the tears.
but it don't matter..that moon & I ain't goin' nowhere.

And so in faith, I remain in wait, keeping the home fires ablaze with
my torn dreams and tattered gown I'll smile and play the clown. As I
watch a burned out star lose it's place in the sky tonight, I swallow
my pride, and bite into my pain knowing to him this heart is forever chained.




 

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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Friday, September 27, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

thanks for telling their story with me, blue angel...
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  • A former member wrote: A very well composed poetry from your deepest muse, this is so well written as I love each phrasing of this beautifully penned thoughts of yours, and my fave lines are- The silence of this house is deafening today driving me further into the dark corners of madness. His voice still methodically dances through my mind with all those shattering little lies that I choose to harbor....Nicely done! thank you for sharing, all the best...AD

  • dwells On Saturday, September 28, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Tremendous slice of life and the realism was totally captivating. Reminds me a bit of Johnny Cash's "Sunday Morning Coming Down", written by Kris Kristofferson as I recall, cheers guys!

  • haunted On Friday, September 27, 2013, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    excellent guys, a well done collab! I enjoyed the story in this has a strong southern feel to it to me for some reason. but great vizuals. loved it...awesome!

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, September 28, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Todd. we tried to give it a Southern tone, along w/touches of religion & remorse...

  • blue angel On Friday, September 27, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    I found this to be a charming slice of the bittersweet American pie... we both had to take a bite... Thank you too, blues... much enjoyed the piece ;)~

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