A Tale of Tigers ~feat FadedBlues~

By Nehema




somebody said its great to be young.
he neglected the part about broken hearts,
the sad songs after they're sung.


took forever to get here, though the days flew
made it through tattered and scarred
in time, understanding and respect grew


reworked & designed, older & wiser:
its a subtle jungle to prowl in.
you'll know the whores by their eyes,
and the saints by their sin.


proud of my experience, I wear it well
once free and wild, the shrew grew tame,
still, livelier than ever, different,
though so much remains the same


you stay angry & drunk,
you stumble around blind.
you find a pretty ass & you beat it 
tough love is the only kind.


gone are the days of pretty pelts
prancing and preening
want a king for my jungle
not a cub still searching for meaning


I brushed away dusty leopard spots,
donned a shiny tiger-stripe coat.
I kissed my youth goodbye 
Its the last love song I wrote.





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Copyright 2013 Robyn Layne
Published on Thursday, March 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Thank god I'm in my prime and look it! And thanks FadedBlues for honoring me - XXOO
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  • A former member wrote: It's a hard life through some eyes. Each man is a universe, each world completely different from each other. Cool that you did this together, a gritty tale from the other side of the tracks.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    An awesome collab from start to finish. Soft flow but with no punches pulled. Excellent job both of you. Too cool. Later and til next time -

  • dwells On Thursday, March 14, 2013, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    growl! this was so true and just read today that whores have fallen on hard times because of too many giving it away! Gotta be true if I read in Super Freakonomics, cheers to you both, very high marks.

  • Devilish On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    i've been waiting for this. wondering when it was gonna happen .. the two of you putting together soft notes in stern tongue.. i love this. it worked perfect together. i am proud of you both. and before i go i must be perverted. i pictured things that aren't legal going on. like to me. please. will ya. awesome. bows.. Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, March 14, 2013, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    Robyn, we are taking over the jungle! experience is the best teacher, & this was a very enlightening journey...

  • Nehema On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    lol - Thank you for honoring me sir. This was a pleasure for me. Experience is the greatest teacher, I wouldn't go back to being 20-30 years old for nothing. If only I could pause time now that I'm at an awesome age... Love you baby, again - thank you - XXOO Scholar

  • Star On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Star (920)By person wrote:

    oh this is beautiful, i love this, and i love the metaphor of the tigers tale.. wow.. 10/10 from me... to both of you guys ♥ :D

  • Nehema On Thursday, March 14, 2013, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    Yeah, I about peed on myself at the idea of writing with one of my biggest favs, he's amazing - XXOO Scholar

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