Glorious Hell
By Sean Mc Shane
Am I out of control ? Lost my mind and my soul ?
I sure do hope
so, then I'll never know so . . .
In this existence game, that
has no name
there's no sore winner, for this glorious sinner
I
feel heaven and hell, thru show and tell
nights of hard drinking,
leading to heavier thinking
spirit face down in the mud, choking on
my blood
my shadow will watch awhile, with a twisted smile
no
more sad disguise, no more goddamned lies
the truth is a just a weapon,
often used to threaten
All the women with venom, don't worry
I'll get them
I never fear a snake, heads are easy to take
when
they're better off dead, like every Angel said
with wicked words of
steel, too cold for a real feel
I abandoned my heart, to go back to
the start
and the ghost you know, in memory he will show
making you
all remember, you killed me in November
the living now become the
dead, buried in my head
pity the die hard romantic, just die
- more frantic
make me smile ever after, thru her echoing laughter
knowing I'm the one, who gave up the last run
the sword has been
shattered, not that it mattered
my lust filled magnum, I still use
to gag them
I'd rather swing the axe of hope, into your throat
as I pray for your last breath, I beg God for my death
maybe He'll
forgive, maybe She'll force me to live
the Angels who love
me will be upset, with regret
the demons of chaos will rejoice, at
this righteous choice
but it won't be for long, when they realize
how wrong
another moment of clarity, ignored for my own parody
desperate to believe, there was nothing up her sleeve
hind sight
is 20-20, always amusing but never funny
when this bottle runs
dry, then it's time to say goodbye
continue this tale to tell, then
sleep deep forever in the glory of my hell . . .
Author's Note:
I said enoughComments on "Glorious Hell"
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A former member wrote:
Very nicely written. Struck a few chords inside. Well done.
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On Wednesday, April 10, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thaks dm, and welcome to DP. Cool. Later -
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On Thursday, February 21, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Damn Sean, this is the rawest and realest I've ever read from you. This is why I love poetry - XXOO
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On Friday, February 22, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Robyn, That's why I love it too. Thanks for bmark, always cool. Til next time -
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On Wednesday, February 20, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Everybody for the cool comments. I didn't mean to cause any alarm. Just gotta let the Shadow inside wield the pen from time to time. And thanks AM and PK1 for the bookmarks. Always cool. Thanks again everybody. Til next time and later -
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On Wednesday, February 20, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...that's a good idea: stick around til the bottle's empty, I ain't leavin' it for somebody else...
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I feel heaven and hell, thru show and tell.. damn sean. you write with venom and intrigue. most definitely why your a favorite. i love my sean mcshane.
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
goodness... i'm sorry i'm at a loss for words here... excellent write though...
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
One of your best and perhaps most despondent, drop me a line and we'll talk, or not - cheers laddie!
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
This was very intense. With such a fluid rhythm it was amazing. And only got better as it ended. Well writeend indeed. I enjoyed it very much
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A former member wrote:
Oh wow...This really spoke to me.