Fate... feat ~Devilish~

By Nehema

dis.orderly . 
momma didn't teach any manners ..   

i became brilliant alone 

seeing the un.seeable, 
inside the minds of broken people, 
the choked voiceless, 
cold alone, the hopeless

 roaming through zones.. 
hazardous .
there's a way around the feel ..   

surreal .. 
it seems too far away

untouchable, no face, nameless, 
cant be replaced, 
inside the case of a magicians box, 
waiting to be severed in half

pieces..
one for you..
two for them.. 
how many limbs can i lend..   

detached from the wrath.. 
i'm sinking fast..   

yet floating in my own devoting space

smoke rings rise 
with the fall of your chest, 
hiding lines behind a simple jest, 
needing approval from no one else,   

I escape into the fumes leaving the rest

to fill the room 
whole heartedly consumed..   

the kind of taste you chase ... 
shameless ..
a waste..   

yet i  fit like a glove to your..
level above.. ... 
consumption..
there's no where else
to place your case ..           





i win

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Copyright 2013 Nehema
Published on Saturday, July 20, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • darkheartmagic On Wednesday, December 4, 2013, darkheartmagic (81)By person wrote:

    A damn great write

  • A former member wrote: smoke rings rise with the fall of your chest..inside the case of a magicians box waiting to be severed in half. I know this feeling. A gritty existence you were born into, a victim of circumstance that never had a choice. I love this... It's honest, sad and biting. But it's also accepting, and in that acceptance you find your own individuality that can't be properly compared to someone else. Awesome man.

  • Nehema On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Being born into a mess can be a blessing, though no one wants to be responsible for cleaning it up. Whoot Whoot! * gives kourtni a cookie* Bingo gf, thanks for the comment n comprehension ;) - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Wednesday, July 31, 2013, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    From two of the best, of course it's gonna be awesome. Excellent collab both of you. You should do them more often. Excellent piece. Til next time -

  • Nehema On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Thanks Sean, n believe it or not, we do try to write together from time to time n it usually just doesn't work out for some reason, so the title on this is fitting in several ways - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Ohhhhhhhh sheeeeat hahahahahaha Scholar

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Sunday, July 21, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    " the kind of taste you chase ... shameless .. a waste.. " Loved this. and the ending wrapped it all up perfectly. ♥ Good job ladies. xoxo

  • blue angel On Saturday, July 20, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Super cool collaboration, you two ;) "I escape into the fumes leaving the rest to fill the room whole heartedly consumed. " nice visuals too;)~ ~^_^~ xxx

  • Star On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Star (879)By person wrote:

    awesome collab you two. I hope to read more collabs of you guys, soon. (:

  • dwells On Saturday, July 20, 2013, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    If the glove don't fit then you must acquit! This was a proud pronouncement of spell-breaking, bone crunching, superiority that leaves the reader pecking in the dirt like so many chickens. Pluck me, please, cheers ladies!!

  • Devilish On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    LMFAO..Oh my god you kill me.. so many chickens.. lmao.. you are my hero.. dwells you have made my day.. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: the beginning sounds like you explaining my cousin pretty cool Scholar

  • FadedBlues On Saturday, July 20, 2013, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...I can see you both among the broken, the lonely, the desperate, offering whatever help you can afford. pretty nice, Ladies...

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Mwahahaha sealing the fate! It IS the kind of taste we chase. Bravo *grins*

  • Devilish On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Ok i am going to stroke my own ego right now. if i hadn't already posted i would of took the glory for this one on my page.. lol. this is beautiful. i believe the best collab i've been a part of really.. it fits perfectly with the time the place the notion the feel and the win.. bows, Scholar

  • Nehema On Saturday, July 20, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    It's always an honor and a pleasure to write with you. I believe this was the fastest collab I've ever completed, and the best - like the title says, it must have been fate. Love you HUGE - XXOO Scholar

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