church of canonized tears

By FadedBlues

the old women sit, with veiled faces,
waiting for Father Tom-of-the-Beautiful-Eyes
to begin mass. they sit and pray the rosary,
fingertips pushing against each wooden bead,
feeling the splinters as surely as Christ felt
the spikes driven into his palms.

they pray for husbands long since dead.
they pray for sons killed in battles
in merciless foreign lands
or here on their own streets,
blood that the rain won't wash away.

they pray for daughters gone away
to violent beds for a handful of scarlet dollars.
for brass trinkets. scribbled promises vanishing in firelight.
or the hunger for someone's certified, pre-owned heart.

they pray for strangers trembling in rooms with broken
windows and battered doors, immersed in dope and booze,
and a unique misery tailored especially for them.

and before mass begins, not wanting to omit anyone,
not even those who have steadfastly shunned
the proposition of faith-hope-and-charity,
they pray for me.




 
 

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Copyright 2012 FadedBlues
Published on Sunday, October 7, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Kaleidoscope_Heart On Monday, October 29, 2012, Kaleidoscope_Heart (111)By person wrote:

    What a knockout. Your poetry is history, really.

  • ApathysKiss On Wednesday, October 10, 2012, ApathysKiss (377)By person wrote:

    very thought provoking..there is much to pray, but no thanking....a lingering write. -=*AK*=-

  • A former member wrote: "the old women sit, with veiled faces, waiting for Father Tom-of-the-Beautiful-Eyes to begin mass. they sit and pray the rosary, fingertips pushing against each wooden bead, feeling the splinters as surely as Christ felt" A Phenomenal stanza Truly Inspirational and expressive. Thank you

  • FadedBlues On Monday, October 8, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. a little Sunday excursion into dark places, lighting a few vigil candles on the way...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    This is fn awesome, 'Blues. Some serious fire in these words. Excellent ! Later -

  • Nehema On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Wow Faded, definitely a 10. "the hunger for someone's certified, pre-owned heart" wow, and the ending brought real tears to my eyes. Bless your heart - XXOO Scholar

  • Devilish On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    they pray for daughters gone away to violent beds for a handful of scarlet dollars. for brass trinkets. scribbled promises vanishing in firelight. or the hunger for someone's certified, pre-owned heart. ............... epic. fucking beautiful. this inspired me sir. thank you . and you always move me 1000 ways to die .. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: provokes much thought. I love the melancholy and dark truth you speak Scholar

  • dalphon On Sunday, October 7, 2012, dalphon (70)By person wrote:

    scribbled promises vanishing in firelight ... that line really touched me. a wonderful piece..

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