church of canonized tears
By FadedBlues
the old
women sit, with veiled faces,
waiting for Father Tom-of-the-Beautiful-Eyes
to begin mass. they sit and pray the rosary,
fingertips pushing
against each wooden bead,
feeling the splinters as surely as Christ
felt
the spikes driven into his palms.
they pray for husbands
long since dead.
they pray for sons killed in battles
in merciless
foreign lands
or here on their own streets,
blood that the rain
won't wash away.
they pray for daughters gone away
to
violent beds for a handful of scarlet dollars.
for brass trinkets.
scribbled promises vanishing in firelight.
or the hunger for someone's
certified, pre-owned heart.
they pray for strangers trembling
in rooms with broken
windows and battered doors, immersed in dope
and booze,
and a unique misery tailored especially for them.
and before mass begins, not wanting to omit anyone,
not even those
who have steadfastly shunned
the proposition of faith-hope-and-charity,
they pray for me.
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Comments on "church of canonized tears"
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On Monday, October 29, 2012, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
What a knockout. Your poetry is history, really.
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On Wednesday, October 10, 2012, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
very thought provoking..there is much to pray, but no thanking....a lingering write. -=*AK*=-
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A former member wrote:
"the old women sit, with veiled faces,
waiting for Father Tom-of-the-Beautiful-Eyes
to begin mass. they sit and pray the rosary,
fingertips pushing against each wooden bead,
feeling the splinters as surely as Christ felt"
A Phenomenal stanza
Truly Inspirational and expressive.
Thank you
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. a little Sunday excursion into dark places, lighting a few vigil candles on the way...
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
This is fn awesome, 'Blues. Some serious fire in these words. Excellent ! Later -
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Wow Faded, definitely a 10. "the hunger for someone's certified, pre-owned heart" wow, and the ending brought real tears to my eyes. Bless your heart - XXOO
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
they pray for daughters gone away to violent beds for a handful of scarlet dollars. for brass trinkets. scribbled promises vanishing in firelight. or the hunger for someone's certified, pre-owned heart. ............... epic. fucking beautiful. this inspired me sir. thank you . and you always move me 1000 ways to die ..
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A former member wrote:
provokes much thought. I love the melancholy and dark truth you speak
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, dalphon
(70) wrote:
scribbled promises vanishing in firelight ... that line really touched me. a wonderful piece..