Comments by ApathysKiss
- "well if you're not happy do something about it. least you can do for your wife is let her be happy with someone else who wants to be with her as you should for yourself. life is too short to be miserable."
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Faith: To the Mormons" by BetaWolfinVA
- "you live! it's nice to read your ponderings again...and such sequential reflective thoughts leading to its target with each stanza, the artful critique of modernism swirled nonchalantly to the depths of a drink...alone. like fixing the flaws of a wretched world would be as futile as rectifying oneself. dark poetry. =] -=AK=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Thoughts In General" by Doc
- "while i'm overseas at the mo for leave i thought id read another of yours. I couldn't do this any more justice with an intellectual incision of the thoughts you have stirred within myself but this was so perfectly articulated-eloquent yet numbly piercing, punctures holes to feelings I too have bottled up inside, made me sad of the reality of such a resentful situation. -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Hawk Inside" by Dilated View
- "beauty is in the eye of the beholder indeed, your talent is wonderfully from another time, a breath of fresh air here...this seeped much wisdom and truth, eloquently stated, shakespearean, which i adore... =] -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Beauty Bowl" by Poe Etiquette
- "such a beautifully woven deposition/thoughtful trepidation. the 6th stanza just melts me through and through as with the final....wonderful. -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "The Length of Time" by Poe Etiquette
- "this was powerfully and beautifully shattering, minimally expressed with maximal impact...well written. -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "Longing" by Guillotine
- "and it's a powerful allegory indeed. I like the subtle references to the shackles of capitalism/banality of a monetary world one exists in, striving for survival in a world out for themselves....carnivores/poachers all for pseudo-honour? subtle critical poetry I much enjoyed. hehe i got the email...it is a shame that the better writes get pushed down and are rarely discovered as much as the crappy writes...even with the forward buttons they get lost! i miss the old way of viewing recently posted pieces in the one page =[ -=AK=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "The Rhinoceros" by Alchemist
- "your political pieces were always quite piercing of irony and satire and this cascaded a torrent of truths to this shithole of a place we circle...such a profound awakening....hmm...i finally read your profile and got that link, keep me posted on when your book gets published. glad you are still writing -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "this mangled, rotting world...." by TheBardOfBlasphemy
- "i echo these thoughts and feelings....usually when i'm uninspired about the world...what is the point of achieving more than mediocre when we all end up the same anyway...dead and buried, for what purpose would all the time and effort be? maybe there is no time....everything is temporary, even these futile thoughts...what is the point and purpose of conjuring these thoughts...lol damn! thank you for seizing this...-=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "a breaking of will." by eidos
- "there's nothing quite like a mother indeed! wonderful tribute, gray, i may copy this for my own mum next mother's day haha with your permission. =] -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "A Mother's Touch" by Gray Vision
- "this was lovely, subtle imagery and impacting sentimentality, well-structured, catches your breath in the end. you delivered well, by 2nd stanza i felt it was a school hehe before i even read the note. awesome. -=*AK*=-"
Posted by ApathysKiss on "These Brick Halls" by lupus tenebrae
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