Thoughts In General
By Doc
This feels a lot like writing through a strainer,
The words pour
forth,
As if being dropped out of a glass,
And is filtered and
ripped apart,
As if blended from the start.
It is hard
to look at the world and see it as great.
With the wars, the oppression,
the telemarketers
Constantly hounding at you,
Begging for your
change,
I am starting to believe they misunderstand the meaning of
the word.
Change.
It is not a thing to be thrown around
lightly.
It is as new, and strange, and as fundamental as Jesus.
However, this one will have less wine.
Yet as useful as Wine
and jesus are,
There still exists that block.
That mountain
in your face,
Daring you to test it's patients.
I always
thought, "That's why God build the bomb."
So there it lay,
The last of a once great mountain,
Destroyed for the sake of artistic
brilliance.
Oddly enough, I fail to see the light.
Perhaps, I
am not looking in the right place.
Perhaps I do not posses the brilliance
to see it.
Or perhaps I need a little more Vodka to convince me I
know anything.
Well, "refill" has always been such a wonderful word.
Comments on "Thoughts In General"
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A former member wrote:
i missed you. you've lost none of your tactful brilliance.
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On Wednesday, November 21, 2012, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
you live! it's nice to read your ponderings again...and such sequential reflective thoughts leading to its target with each stanza, the artful critique of modernism swirled nonchalantly to the depths of a drink...alone. like fixing the flaws of a wretched world would be as futile as rectifying oneself. dark poetry. =] -=AK=-
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On Tuesday, November 13, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
good piece. Seinfeld said, 'I don't have time now, give me your home #, I'll call you later." telemarketer said, 'I don't like to be called at home.' Seinfeld said.'now you know how I feel'...