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I'll Be With You Soon
By l mo
Wide awake with nothing to do.
Bored stiff,
I'm talking to you....
You left my heart in peices,
That I am not able to pick up.
I had so much to tell you,
Why did you make that final cut?
I stand at your grave,
Unable to cry,
I wish you were here
Why did you die?
So much to tell you,
I hope you can here me.
If you hadn't gone and killed yourself,
Think about how happy we'd be.
Words unsaid
Tears unshed,
I hope for the chance
To see you again.
Wide awake with nothing to do,
I've made my decision,
I'll be with you soon.
One quick swipe,
Soon we be,
Together again,
Happily.
One again I feel
The sensation
Of metal on flesh
I wish for death.
Wide awake with nothing to do,
My eyes fade,
I'll be with you soon....
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Copyright 2005 night_sky
Comments on "I'll Be With You Soon"
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On Tuesday, August 23, 2005, l mo
(55)
wrote:
I just want to clear a few things up... THIS IS NOT BASED ON ME! My friend lost someone very close to her this summer because they killed themselves. She was talking to me about how if one more person dies on her, she would kill herself. And, yes, I know
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On Tuesday, August 23, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
I know it's not a good idea to kill yourself over someone, that's what I told her. Luckily, she listened.
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On Monday, August 22, 2005, peril_notion
(88) wrote:
*claps*
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A former member wrote:
I don't think anyone is saying it's good that he wants to die to be with the one he loves, rather it's good that he can express his feelings. Most of us have had a feeling like this, but the more intelligent of us find a way to live through it. Six is rig
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A former member wrote:
Six is right, it is completely stupid to kill yourself over someone, but it is not an idiotic feeling, just human nature. - U.P.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
I'm a girl....
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A former member wrote:
how right you are...sorry. So just replace every he with a she and we'll be happy.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
I was refering mainly to the comment of saying that a .45 was a better choice, or something.
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A former member wrote:
oh
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Doc
(145) wrote:
i agree strongly with six on that, but it doesnt diminish the power of your work
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, l mo
(55) wrote:
thanks
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Killing yourself over anyone for any reason is completely stupid. This is not original, as others have said, and people should not be saying it's 'good' that you want to die. Fucking idiotic. Life is too good to throw away over another being.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Doc
(145) wrote:
.45 was my choice
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On Saturday, August 20, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
good work... "I'm talking to you..." to a dead person... "I'll be with you soon..." the final meeting place... spooky write
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A former member wrote:
after reading this i went and huged my loved ones.......... sometimes u know when someone doesnt hug back...........
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