Comments by Doc
- "I like the way you wrote this piece. It is a little unusual to me, but I have a strange connection to it. It feel much the same sometimes. "
Posted by Doc on "Pastel of a Wooden Shade" by Eric
- "I find this peace quite intesting. Its like Jack London's "To Build a Fire" with a sad, humbling, tragic, heartbraking twist. Its begs the question, alway depending of the real pain and wounds, "Where is the healing light?" or "Does it exhist?" Maybe Im totally off, but I hope I've hit something here. Beautiful work."
Posted by Doc on "The deep freeze, the saviour in the end. " by demonofthefall
- "Well I cant possibly imagine that you have a hint of pent up hostility and loss. Having not been through something like this I feel not capable of offering anything other than a wish of peace, and sadness well written. "
Posted by Doc on "Pearls of Tears" by ToxicLove
- "I think I might comprehend the way your going with this peace, and while unorthidox it does vivdly get the point across. That is indeed a rare talent in this modern age of stupidity."
Posted by Doc on "fudge words" by skully
- "Well I would certainly offer my interest, I do enjoy the use of line in this piece, and for its subject. With that in mind, it can make it hard to read when searching for the next line. Well Done"
Posted by Doc on "Station" by TheUltimateOutlaw
- "Key to true faith... think or feel?
Im amused at my former comment. While my thoughts follow your piece, I took a totally different rout in reading this. This time I asked a question, the last time I sympathized. Way to keep me thinking."
Posted by Doc on "Awakening Faith" by stargaze0991
- "You know, of all the things that youll find in this place, it is a rare day that you find some true honest hope. Its just so rare today, especially among this community, where to hope or be optomistic is commit some sort of shunned sin. "
Posted by Doc on "The Car Ride" by stargaze0991
- "I felt this one. Ive away for some time, and this is the first thing I read that made me read it again, for personal value. Hoorah."
Posted by Doc on "Chasing the White Rabbit" by Step_20
- "Its interesting the way you set this up, its as if you make a statement, then have a thought. This is repeated throughout the poem, yet the thought does not neededly apply to the statement, but the statement always applies to the thought."
Posted by Doc on "the glass breaks within earshot" by whisperer
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