Lust for the Dead
By SilentStalker
And yet you fight to sway my blade; to
keep your life you strive.
But you will do no good for me
while you are still alive.
So in a flash your throat is
slit; your blood is dripping down.
I watch your gags, the
blood you spit while thrashing all around.
You grasp
your throat, but still you choke, and blood is all you see.
You're acting like a slaughtered pig thrown down in front of
me.
And finally your choking stops; mere silence takes its
place.
You're slumped into a little pile, fear strewn along
your face.
I've brought you past the bridge of life;
you are now in my world.
I want to show you all my love, my
precious little girl.
Now calm your soul; you look so scared,
yet now you don't oppose.
I kiss your lips, i stroke your hair,
I take off all your clothes.
So beautiful you are to
me; I clean up all the blood.
I'm so aroused; I cannot wait;
I drag you from the mud.
I spread your legs; I come inside;
your flesh is getting cold.
Your skin so soft; your lips
so tight; my lust I cannot hold.
I thrust with greed;
I thrust with rage; you still look out in fear.
I close your
eyes, I kiss your cheek, I whisper in your ear.
I set you
now on top of me; my hands caress your breasts.
I'm writhing
here in ecstasy, your head upon my chest.
And finally
my climax comes; I have fulfilled my need.
I hold you tight
against my waist and give you all my seed.
But you should
have no need for it as you will soon decay,
So now I bury
you with love, and calmly walk away.
Comments on "Lust for the Dead"
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On Thursday, June 26, 2014, haunted
(851) wrote:
this is really good, the poem has unspeakable rhythm to it and rhymes that make me jealous. everything is perfect and the story you tell is amazing and how your words paint the picture, its just beautiful. I fucking love it. awesome!
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On Friday, January 17, 2014, WillowGreybird
(23) wrote:
This is my new favorite. Not just from you, but from....anyone ever.
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A former member wrote:
perhaps it's due to my odd sense of humor and general sickness but, I found this eerily funny. I seriously love this! sick beauty.
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On Friday, September 28, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
When I was 13 years old and in the 8th grade I read this poem. I then showed this poem to all of my friends. I believe it was shortly after you joined the site (the most recent post had been "The Chainsaw Show"). We actually printed out a copy of this and then our teacher found it. They blocked DP from my school's server and we got in trouble. It was worth it.
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On Friday, September 28, 2012, SilentStalker
(1067) wrote:
...I was here for not quite a month then, haha...back when some of the posts I was submitting, were writes of mine from 2-4 years prior, that I was filling in during creative dry spells...this one disturbed all but one of my so-called disturbed friends back in 2002...Stalker, got that last one, because, laughably, he couldn't stand the touching of feet...
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, With love_Crow
(83) wrote:
Consider me your new stalker...You are EPIC!
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, Devilish
(2662) wrote:
No he's mine!!!! Lol... I told you!! Now read ice cream man....
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On Sunday, January 10, 2010, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
I know of no other place necrophilia can be applauded. I LOVE it here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A former member wrote:
this was so damned twisted.
i love it!
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On Tuesday, December 25, 2007, Revisable Retina
(83) wrote:
i think this piece is sparked with imagination depravity and sickness..... all was granidose as grotesque, only part i would change, is the seed part... a bit corny, but all together, elequently structured, refreshing to what im used to reading
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A former member wrote:
And also ny the way, my husband is obsessed with feet. That made it even more eerie. And now I'm done.
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A former member wrote:
Oh and by the way, it hit me extra hard because my husband always calls me his "precious little girl" when he's... having his way with me, so to speak. THAT sent a shiver down my back, I can tell you. It was definitely a little creepy to see that.
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A former member wrote:
This one hit me hard. It reminds me of Necrofeelings, one of my pieces, only again, we are on opposite sides of the same coin. I find necrophilia the logical extension of the ultimate control and possession. And I see, so do you. Fabulous read.
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A former member wrote:
wow.
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On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, unspeakable truth
(100) wrote:
OMG I love this... So twistly brillant!
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On Thursday, September 7, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
You popped my horror-reading virginity on this one, I'm not going to stop reading this ever, it was the first work I ever read of yours, and right then and there I was pulled in. I knew then you'd be deliciously devious! and well erm stalkerish
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On Saturday, April 29, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
I can't stop reading this, this one makes me feel like I'm not such a weirdo, and it just embraces all the wrongest things^.^...
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On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, Vexed
(74) wrote:
interesting, one of the most interesting poems I have read... what is your oldest poem that you have posted here?
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On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, SilentStalker
(1067) wrote:
...oldest ones would be the early love poems, but as far as dark stuff, 'The Vampire', followed by 'Evil Eyes'...
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On Wednesday, February 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
wow I thought I had problems Nice write
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A former member wrote:
wow, this was scarey and disturbing... next time i'm depressed i'll give you a call, ok? lol *~`void`~*
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On Monday, November 14, 2005, coly
(54) wrote:
thats fucking aswome it feels real
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On Monday, November 14, 2005, SilentStalker
(1067) wrote:
...this is what listening to Type-O-Negative while drunk after a stressful day will do to you...
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On Saturday, July 16, 2005, Delilah
(113) wrote:
haha...You're so sick...~Delilah~
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On Friday, May 20, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
amazing..wow...i like...what a freakin genius mind u have! (excuse the spelling on genius) -Kel
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On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
You never cease to amaze me, Darun. Your works are always awesome. Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Monday, April 4, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
i marvel at the trim of this master[batable] piece.........sure she's being 'raped' BUT you never stray far from the love..... '....So now I bury you with love...' ....touching in a bludgeon to death kinda way;) elisa
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
yea, sick and yet, erotic...i'm speechless now...DAMN!
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On Saturday, March 12, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
gah, so turned on and so repulsed, I love it! hot stuff, it's got all the good things, sex, violence, passion, anger.... lust. Brilliant.
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On Saturday, January 29, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
I've fallen in love with you words. So erotic and violent. Such fantasy... -kitty
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, ardneK
(73) wrote:
That is just...hott...great in all aspects, good one Silent - >|
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this was very morbid and twisted, yet disturbingly erotic, i loved it ~kristy
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2005, ZealousValadiction
(42) wrote:
And I was scared to put some of my poems up ,nice discription I like this one silent -Eversio-
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Necromancer
(71) wrote:
This was great you sick necrophiliac fuck. i'm glad you told me of this poem it's awesome in all aspects. -Justin
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A former member wrote:
i liked this alot! i think it was one of the best things i've read. awesome work!
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A former member wrote:
very nice
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A former member wrote:
rape
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On Monday, July 19, 2004, SilentStalker
(1067) wrote:
...whaddya mean...? she never said 'no'...
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
This is fucking...uhhmm oh my god. very erotic...gorgeous i love the description~ss
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A former member wrote:
Wow...this is so intense and brutal, and romantic...god, I love it. *heart* Going on my favorites, most definitely.
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
oh wow..this was really, well....sick..not in A really bad way, just makes you wonder..-fairy-
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, SilentStalker
(1067) wrote:
...yes! I'm sick! ...one point for the Stalker...um, I mean...thanks...haha...
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On Friday, April 9, 2004, Syn
(76) wrote:
wow...I am speechless.