The Pillar
By SilentStalker
Before him in the barren sand,
he saw a pile of stone
The broken pillar he once used to help
him stand alone
But now it couldn't stand itself, sprawled out
in disarray
The pieces he had learned to love had all but washed
away
And at the sight he shed a tear
For broken pieces
of his friend
He slowly swallowed all his fear
And at the sight he shed a tear
He'll spend a week; he'll spend a year
To help his pillar stand again
And at the sight
he shed a tear
For broken pieces of his friend
A mason he knew he was not, but still he could not
fail
His memory of what was there caught every last detail
So then he would begin to build from all that had remained
And each day it would take more shape of what he would regain
He knew that it would be okay
The man
had only tried his best
His passion helped him
find a way
He knew that it would be okay
His kindness it would soon repay
And of this oath they would attest
He knew that
it would be okay
The man had only tried his
best
And once he placed the final piece,
he knew it would sustain
But then the man would soon collapse,
his vigor now was drained
And as he falls, his hand will
touch this structure of a friend
His pillar, now rebuilt and
strong, would help him stand again...
Comments on "The Pillar"
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A former member wrote:
Derin it's Tara I really need your help ... Please mail me
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...just simply amazing. The feeling of seeing a friend so broken that it brakes you as you build them up again and help them stand and then once more they do so for you. A lovely powerful write.
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On Sunday, September 18, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
So one of the neighborhood "bad boys" is made of more than wicked rhyme and sweeet verse? Hmmmmmm... It seems as though you tend to give a little more than the norm... But truely that's what makes you more of a man!!!
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A former member wrote:
it makes sense.. but that doesn't mean i like the cycle. I'll be waiting for that moment of peace
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On Sunday, May 4, 2008, elisa
(1595) wrote:
..absolute mind penetration. still perfect.
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Bravo, Darun. I've said this before: You are truly heroic.
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...it's funny; every time I feel I'm about to fall, this reminder of true friendship brings tears to my eyes and a reason to keep going...and I would have never done that without a very important person on here...
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On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
..it's unfortunate that she never realized that it was written for her...either that, or she just refuses to believe so...but it was, and it always reminds me of each true friend I make...and gives me the strength to keep going, for them...
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On Friday, May 5, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
your commitment to structure without sacrificing rhythm or content stands unrivaled.......the subtle nuances that trickle down in rivulets of picture perfect patterns are stunning.......
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On Friday, May 5, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
....... with that said.... i love the feel of this.... you captured every scattered piece leaving nothing apart from the whole.... this rocked every inch of my cellular being.
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On Friday, May 5, 2006, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...a poem is only ever as good as the feeling that created it; and it took a true friend I never realized I had to remind me of that...the feeling is perfect; I hope the portrayal of it didn't falter...
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, yslehc
(334) wrote:
:) nothing left to say , they've said it all lol
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Simply beautiful. I too, know this. Sometimes we just need a helping hand to lift us from the rubble. Awesome write. Julia~
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, sIo
(898) wrote:
crushing...heh
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
the rhyme scheme is impeccable! and as for the content, it's a powerhouse. Everything fit well together, as if perfectly calculated. sweet emotion
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Forgotten Angel
(309) wrote:
i cant say enough..i cant really say anything except that you've stunned me and amazed me with your words..like josh said..its mesmerizing..this is too good for words -Kel
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
Wow Darun, Unbelievably mesmorizing. Such a beutiful message of the limits and struggle someone will go to. Great flow, simply splendid write in every way. Awesome job man ~Josh~
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On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
omg Darun, I couldn't even dare say what.......No....nothing could explain