The Pillar

By SilentStalker





Before him in the barren sand, he saw a pile of stone
The broken pillar he once used to help him stand alone
But now it couldn't stand itself, sprawled out in disarray
The pieces he had learned to love had all but washed away

        And at the sight he shed a tear
        For broken pieces of his friend
        He slowly swallowed all his fear
        And at the sight he shed a tear

        He'll spend a week; he'll spend a year
        To help his pillar stand again
        And at the sight he shed a tear
        For broken pieces of his friend


A mason he knew he was not, but still he could not fail
His memory of what was there caught every last detail
So then he would begin to build from all that had remained
And each day it would take more shape of what he would regain


        He knew that it would be okay
        The man had only tried his best
        His passion helped him find a way
        He knew that it would be okay

        His kindness it would soon repay
        And of this oath they would attest
        He knew that it would be okay
        The man had only tried his best


And once he placed the final piece, he knew it would sustain
But then the man would soon collapse, his vigor now was drained
And as he falls, his hand will touch this structure of a friend
His pillar, now rebuilt and strong, would help him stand again...

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© 2006 Darun Ferguson
Published on Wednesday, May 3, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Derin it's Tara I really need your help ... Please mail me

  • A former member wrote: Amazing...just simply amazing. The feeling of seeing a friend so broken that it brakes you as you build them up again and help them stand and then once more they do so for you. A lovely powerful write.

  • Devilish On Sunday, September 18, 2011, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    So one of the neighborhood "bad boys" is made of more than wicked rhyme and sweeet verse? Hmmmmmm... It seems as though you tend to give a little more than the norm... But truely that's what makes you more of a man!!! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: it makes sense.. but that doesn't mean i like the cycle. I'll be waiting for that moment of peace Scholar

  • elisa On Sunday, May 4, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ..absolute mind penetration. still perfect.

  • Thorn On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    Bravo, Darun. I've said this before: You are truly heroic.

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...it's funny; every time I feel I'm about to fall, this reminder of true friendship brings tears to my eyes and a reason to keep going...and I would have never done that without a very important person on here... Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ..it's unfortunate that she never realized that it was written for her...either that, or she just refuses to believe so...but it was, and it always reminds me of each true friend I make...and gives me the strength to keep going, for them... Scholar

  • elisa On Friday, May 5, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    your commitment to structure without sacrificing rhythm or content stands unrivaled.......the subtle nuances that trickle down in rivulets of picture perfect patterns are stunning.......

  • elisa On Friday, May 5, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ....... with that said.... i love the feel of this.... you captured every scattered piece leaving nothing apart from the whole.... this rocked every inch of my cellular being.

  • SilentStalker On Friday, May 5, 2006, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...a poem is only ever as good as the feeling that created it; and it took a true friend I never realized I had to remind me of that...the feeling is perfect; I hope the portrayal of it didn't falter... Scholar

  • yslehc On Thursday, May 4, 2006, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    :) nothing left to say , they've said it all lol

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, May 4, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    Simply beautiful. I too, know this. Sometimes we just need a helping hand to lift us from the rubble. Awesome write. Julia~

  • sIo On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    crushing...heh

  • hate_doll On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    the rhyme scheme is impeccable! and as for the content, it's a powerhouse. Everything fit well together, as if perfectly calculated. sweet emotion

  • Forgotten Angel On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    i cant say enough..i cant really say anything except that you've stunned me and amazed me with your words..like josh said..its mesmerizing..this is too good for words -Kel

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    Wow Darun, Unbelievably mesmorizing. Such a beutiful message of the limits and struggle someone will go to. Great flow, simply splendid write in every way. Awesome job man ~Josh~

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, May 3, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    omg Darun, I couldn't even dare say what.......No....nothing could explain

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