The Blind Artist

By Malice In Wonderland

I tried to paint
the sky for you
seeking cherry blossom sunsets
fading into twilight hues
dotting stars in glittered frenzy

I reached for your hand
and saw you see me
smiling at you
or maybe a distant memory
someday
in the making

someday.

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Copyright 2012 Rain In The Willows
Published on Wednesday, May 9, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: what a great poem short but it packs a big punch to the soul! I LOVED IT!

  • A former member wrote: Wonderful...

  • A former member wrote: thank you for sharing this enlightening creation.....i thoroughly enjoyed it...-rc/\ol

  • Six-Out On Saturday, May 12, 2012, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    When did you start writing again?! I like it.

  • dwells On Wednesday, May 9, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Nicely done, yet try as we might, the memories remain, and almost always, we can't go back and re-live them, cheers!

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, May 9, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...this is very pretty. 'memory in the making': we want the substance & pleasure of an experiance for a long time, before it's relegated to a pleasnt memory...

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