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~An Imbecile's First Lesson In Cutting~
By Zhee
[You sit in paralytic isolation in the blackest of chasms….what
are you contemplating? whilst you behold your keloid adorned scars, eclipsed
under the dark shadows of your tattooed arms…]
Forsaken in the ferment of rampant emotions… drifting into the abysmal
crevices of my bereft soul… why ask when you cannot discern…who
would know death if had not experienced it…..
[I regret I am intrigued…. I am but a drone for the mystification
that is etched within your mutilated skin… entranced by the razor
blade screaming within your hands… for my own barren hands lie devoid
of such feeling…]
So you come here to watch…? Witness me slit open my pain… bare
my wrists for sanctification… carve out another wound …one
for each act of sacrilege this defiled soul has endured?
[I wish I could see your soul… I crave for that vision …
but I can only see its shattered reflections in the rents you create…
only see its shards dissecting out of your wrists like the birth of a tormented
being…]
It is not the birth… it is the demise of my existence….streams
of glistening red is my reality….the pain ridden ecstasy of lacerated
flesh is my redemption…my sense of verity is not yours… we
live in the same world… yet you cannot see….
[I strive to … but I feel impotent…as if iron gates of my
imbecilic perception, deny me the right of passage beyond this clouded
vision…. yes, we live in the same world…. perhaps I am blind…]
No... you are not blind… I just see too much….
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Thursday, October 21, 2004.
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, ashrain
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wrote:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMAZING!! i think i almost cried!! fantastic!! ~ash
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
I always suck at commenting, I admit, but this is truly a work of art
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On Monday, November 8, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
Christ, ur friggin amazing.
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On Sunday, October 31, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
I really like the way you've given this a duality- the way you manage to give the reality to the pain and contrast it with the silliness of the act. great piece
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On Friday, October 29, 2004, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
Zhee, you have such depth and passion in your work...I can relate so much...
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On Monday, October 25, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
beautiful. and that's it, pure beauty. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
absolutely awesome, zhee, awesome, i was riveted to this, such a refreshing approach to the subject... and the end was just... wow, killer. you are such a good writer, i love the way your mind works :)
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On Thursday, October 21, 2004, FallenFaith
(44) wrote:
This is great, I can't write a comment worth your time. Excellent write.
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A former member wrote:
We are all perpetual slaves of pain..i really like the structure and how you carried it..
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On Thursday, October 21, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
This was amazing, I'm rendered speechless,beautiful work, exquisitly done Kya
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A former member wrote:
If only I had read this when I had a problem. Fucking pivotal, Zhee.
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On Thursday, October 21, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
The last line was as beautifully cryptic as the rest of the work.. many times "Eyes without light can see so clear, what those with sight, are blind to." Excellent write Zhee. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
Oh my, you and your excellence . . "No... you are not blind… I just see too much" I am speechless. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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On Thursday, October 21, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
"we live in the same world… yet you cannot see…" - I feel those lines very much, my friend. Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, October 21, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
i love the style of this...almost like conversations between souls...this is conveyed beautifully...wonderful
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