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the sin
By mysticventures
ripped from the heart of man
a helpless soul
is left floundering
in oblivion
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.
such is the sin
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.
.
of suicide
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, November 14, 2004.
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A former member wrote:
well worded and short. it coaxed a few tears out of me
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On Monday, January 28, 2008, italianbella
(183)
wrote:
powerful intence great write
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On Saturday, June 25, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54) wrote:
So much is said with these chosen words. Very well done
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A former member wrote:
wow..u really captured the feeling with this...it was awesome
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On Sunday, December 12, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
Ouch.. Powerful thunderingly direct piece! That one hurt. Excellent write. 1, Seth
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A former member wrote:
remindes me of me. very compelling work. even though its short, it makes perfect sence. very awesome.
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A former member wrote:
It's nice to see a piece like this that rises above instead of descending below.
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On Saturday, November 20, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
very powerful and compelling.... short, emphatical, and punctuated brilliantly. Awesome write.
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A former member wrote:
Aint that the truth. Cool pc brother I like it.
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, JiNx
(98) wrote:
Wow not sure what to even say... Great write -JiNx(ie)
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, sIo
(898) wrote:
good reminder to all those on dp.
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
..this is powerful.. you take away all the romantacism placed on suicide.. that is certainly a good thing.. -Michael
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
my thanks and love to you Zhee :)
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A former member wrote:
Agreed.
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
you captured this magnificently! absolutely brilliant... loved it....*favs*
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