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FIREWATER
By Zhee
Behold the immaculate idol
Sculpted with fervent rapture,
Baptized with auroral mirages
Its intoxicated eyes could capture….
Pirouetting, waltzes of sublimation,
All desires in a chalice poured,
The liquid fire igniting reverence
For all that sobriety left abhorred.
Dissipated in forgotten dominions –
Memories of a different road,
Embracing the abraded paradise
Blazing rivers of wine bestowed.
Infernal thirst lies unquenched,
Eroded crevices crave in dire,
Scalded idol vertiginously staggers –
Venturing to stifle fire with fire….
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Monday, October 11, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "FIREWATER"
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On Friday, November 12, 2004, Mr King
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wrote:
Wow... This so much like my stuff its scary... or not so scary... You've been swimming in my bathtub... but I'm happy to share my Mr. Bubbles with you... you've got your own beautiful style to things... 1LOVE, Seth
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Derelict Dream
(38) wrote:
I loved the way this started and it didn't disappoint. Good job
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A former member wrote:
as anth said, a dancing energy underlies this peice, i loved the third stanza, brilliant work.
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
terrific kind of energy in this,like seeing the indiana jones bit with that elixer and that whole seen lol,thats what this poem seemed to invoke on one level,more seriously though this is a great work
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On Monday, October 11, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
*favs* - that was totally awsome, incredible, stupendous, oh there just aren't enough adjectives to describe this piece of work!!!
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