Comments by Anth
- "good to see new work from you, I liked how this poem ran full circle, a sweeping journey, the leaves blew in like a songs intro and swept up to a crescendo before settling into a subtle ending"
Posted by Anth on "Winter Pine." by TheProphetUntold
- "I suppose the good thing is that jay z might bring new fans to u2, maybe that's the reasoning, I don't like either but hope you enjoy it"
Posted by Anth on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
- "do you write the poems with the dp notepad?..you should write on your computer and then copy and paste into dp as, if your internet connection is lost, or you press backspace by accident; you could lose your work, i use msword with autosave set to every five mins, you could download openoffice.org if you dont have msword as its just as good- id hate to think that your words could become lost"
Posted by Anth on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
- "wonderful write, I truly enjoyed reading it, so many subtly clever moments that just seem to come so natural to you, it makes us stop and think of it were as you might of rolled it off like jazz, at the same time some parts feel so well thought out for maximum effect and superior placement that it belies the rate at which you post, i especially liked how the hotels, highways changes dwindled back down to its simplest at the end.. apart from the guttural technicality though this was both calming and joyful to read "
Posted by Anth on "A Hundred Highways..." by jonLyndon
- "I would love to exist in one of your poems, i think the scenes you create are more epic and full of longing and darkly adventurous romance than any film i have ever seen"
Posted by Anth on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "sublime work, ive missed that feeling your works inspire, im reminded of no wings - (flash to;) your poetry runs through fields with a torn dress and kisses in the rain(flash to;) wonderfully thought out structure that just mesmerises because it is so integral to the feeling your words give, this is a poem to read until it is remembered off by heart, and i will do"
Posted by Anth on "dreams like ash" by slow.burn.star
- "I have been reading this over and over for the last few days, It is as much like listening to music as reading a poem in the rhythms and atmosphere it has, elegant, calming, lyrical, clever and transient, one of my favourite poems in quite a while"
Posted by Anth on "Self Portrait in A Poem" by jonLyndon
- "great write here man, the gaps between byour works are longer at moment but the precision is still there, to get straight to teh point and create a scene with just the right words for full effect that the reader has to do less work to become emerged in your words, i can only mention that it was a pleasure to read, like the uplifting emotional moment at the climax of a ten minute instrumental"
Posted by Anth on "div.ision" by Six-Out
- "i read this when it was first posted and remember thinking, how fortunate i was to be able to read such a great poem that morning but that i didnt know how to comment, so i left it silent and thankful and just thought that i should comment as i came back to read this today and loved it just as much"
Posted by Anth on "with black on gray" by Six-Out
- "what i love most is how, instead of like, reading a poem with obvious subjeect matter, they sometimes dont give you chance to let your mind wander off, this made me think of so many differnt things and its what i try to do with my own works, its more like looking at a painting than reading words, theres so much freedom and feeling in your poetry that i recall many childhood wonders and dreams whilst reading you and i cant ask for more than that from art"
Posted by Anth on "regurgitated firefly birth" by AniDayz
- "its so exciting when you posst, i love your style and how the natural flow and subconscious tream allows for some of the most clever and fadcinating imagery and turns of phrase, yet it all amounts to the same whole, never losing its focus no matter how many directions it goes in, like a kite on a string, i enjoyed reading this so much and always will do"
Posted by Anth on "regurgitated firefly birth" by AniDayz
- "i know i like a poem, when i think of it on days my mind is clear of all thoughts, the ending of this especially, memorable, and meaning a lot to me"
Posted by Anth on "old oceans" by Six-Out
- "many writers, myself included; have used various metaphors for burning thier work, i used 'a kind ofvsuicide' in a recent work but this is the first time im sure, that someone has said symbolic back button and its a brilliant modern metaphor. i think youve expressed before existence as past tense and its something thats always struck me yet hard to wrap your mind around, i think because a lot of us are caught up in our past too much to move on, everything becomes memory, dreams..expendable..this was a poem with purpose and impactm the last verse resonates.. the title made me think of jackson pollock"
Posted by Anth on "monet would vomit." by Six-Out
- "since your new post *diamond* i read through all the she spoke poems again, i love them, i hope you post more in the future"
Posted by Anth on "she spoke pearl" by Six-Out
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