dreams like ash

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Published on Wednesday, October 13, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

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A former member wrote: Another of your beautiful works that I've currently just read. (: Loved it hun. It's amazing
On Friday, December 20, 2013, Adam (242) wrote:

Interesting, read it twice, got two different versions of a story. I enjoyed the read - both times :)
On Saturday, November 23, 2013, Lady Poetry (38) wrote:

This was amazing...potent and full of darkness! Very well penned x Livvi x
A former member wrote: Symphonies played in my head. Innocence so sweet..
On Friday, April 1, 2011, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

I never know what to say after reading your work, but I'm shaking now:) Good to see something new...
On Saturday, October 30, 2010, Solace (1065) wrote:

So much within such a small space - even more nuances in the third reading than I thought possible. You have a way with words, symbols, nostalgic referentials - this piece is a tapestry finely woven. "cobwebs of clouds/coral melody" I could gorge on this ad infinitum.
A former member wrote: so raw.. these shreds and fragments of beauty.. you weave the natural imagery into something glittering and treasured.... there is an underside here that is so passionately tender...
On Friday, October 15, 2010, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

somber, and raw. i never get to see a piece this short from you. trully in this respect, fewer words produce a more powerfull effect that you seem to master
On Wednesday, October 13, 2010, slow.burn.star (84) wrote:

Thank you, so very much. :o)
A former member wrote: I'm so glad you've posted something new. I got such butterflies when I saw, and still... you gave them such an honorable death in this... I want to wither and die within these wastelands you paint, smoldering landscapes that still tremble with petaled longing... such crushing beauty. Lush, vivid... a quietness... and above all, art.
On Wednesday, October 13, 2010, Anth (1126) wrote:

sublime work, ive missed that feeling your works inspire, im reminded of no wings - (flash to;) your poetry runs through fields with a torn dress and kisses in the rain(flash to;) wonderfully thought out structure that just mesmerises because it is so integral to the feeling your words give, this is a poem to read until it is remembered off by heart, and i will do
On Wednesday, October 13, 2010, Anth (1126) wrote:

I would love to exist in one of your poems, i think the scenes you create are more epic and full of longing and darkly adventurous romance than any film i have ever seen