she spoke silver

By Six-Out

she spoke silver





she spoke silver to me
with a tongue that echo.d breaking down.
reflections like losing ground.
she'd say that stars aren't the only things
worth the shine.

so I made wishes on the words she spit.
when her lips tasted like coal.
back when I still felt I could stop the world from spinning.
so I'd pen her like some antiqued china-
as if I could break her to pieces.
the way waves and sand were meant
to create beaches together.

and she spoke in glimmers.
a voice taking tone from hammers
to points. and I'd let each strike bring the skies.
oh those skies, they'd be alive. she'd whisper.
when silver spoke from her.


and this distraction on page. it makes melting.
seem symbolic.
so I ask again- if she can scream
some substance into me.

and she speaks in precious metals.
beat, she says. to my heart.
beat.


and my chest. it's tasting this night.

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Copyright 2011 Jon Rodgers
Published on Wednesday, March 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sIo On Friday, April 6, 2018, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    Lip biting clenched to the hood of forever.

  • Emma Tenebrae On Saturday, May 5, 2012, Emma Tenebrae (13)By person wrote:

    And I ask again if she can scream some substance into me. Excellent!! So subtle and enticing ... to want to know of the relationship of these two beings.

  • A former member wrote: well that's one way to put it.

  • maddin foxxxy On Saturday, November 5, 2011, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    Your poetry always take me to another place I didn't even know existed. *sighs in awe*

  • A former member wrote: this left me speachless! very well writen and great metaphors

  • A former member wrote: *BRAVO* stands and applauds! wow... metallic metaphors... precious indeed!

  • Ocean of Truth On Wednesday, June 1, 2011, Ocean of Truth (43)By person wrote:

    "so I made wishes on the words she spit. when her lips tasted like coal"... seems like a feeling of carelessness b/c of the ecstasy of the moment... wonderful write

  • lovechild On Monday, May 2, 2011, lovechild (43)By person wrote:

    I have not come to this forum in a very long time, but something made me, in particular to see your newer writings. I love ALL of your 'she spoke' poems more than any other writer I have found online. I have about 300 poems on the Yahoo Answers Poetry Section site which show my improvement and how much I read and give comments to others is shown by the fact that I am the newest on the leaderboard. And still...you are the best poet our day and age has to offer, in the emotive quality and metaphoric content of your work. Impressed as ever. Touched, really.

  • A former member wrote: Even before you get to the last line, you realize there is a pulse in this. "...the way waves and sand were meant to create beaches together." I love this line...exceedingly well done. -Div

  • slow.burn.star On Sunday, April 3, 2011, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    Chest cavity full of countless coins. A song. A bird. Forever. I'm asleep.

  • N3ll On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, N3ll (11)By person wrote:

    I thought long and hard about what to say in my comment on this one, but damn it, like always, your words leave me speechless and breathless.

  • A former member wrote: glistening piece; good to see a poem from you.

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful pice, you captured me with the wonder underneath the words... Splendid.

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    when love isn't the same anymore it can be painful... your rendition is quite good, heart felt... loved the last line.... write on

  • Corinthian On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, Corinthian (306)By person wrote:

    aww listen to you .. how completely gorgeous i wish i spoke in glimmers .... stunning Jon , I have that tempting cake and beer still .

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    ok i'm going to refuse to believe this is anything but six... pure and simple... because i know this is from you, inside... it's deep, drifting and sigh pulling... yeah... i'm still going to say this is all YOU


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