Comments by Ocean of Truth
- "The two men are one and the same, the phantom is just a different part of the man, a part that he has no control over and seems to have its own agenda. Fate is a funny thing..."
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "At a Loss" by Ocean of Truth
- "Having someone ripped from you so early is really hard to deal with, especially when they were your rock, sorry for the loss"
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "-Betrayed- " by Dommi
- ""so I made wishes on the words she spit.
when her lips tasted like coal"... seems like a feeling of carelessness b/c of the ecstasy of the moment... wonderful write"
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "she spoke silver" by Six-Out
- "This was an extremely tame version of what I really wanted to say, but thats why I did the structure the way I did, the first write was just like a long letter that had ALOT of cursing, so I decided I should make it a little more generalized, this one particular person removed most of my faith in humanity... "
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Scumof TheWorld" by Ocean of Truth
- "I love the way you start at the beginning with the eldest, then remove the layer of years and reveal how one can come from something so inncocent and become something completely different... love it"
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Within" by GreekPhilosopher
- "You can feel the frustration here, especially there at the end. Many have felt the same way, you're not alone..."
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Purple Sun" by Anaelle
- "I was really trying to steer wasy from making this personal, because I've been told since Elementary school that I would be a better writer if I could write better impersonally. Always love the feedback ainsof, really value the opinion of a great writer like yourself."
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "The Passive Observer" by Ocean of Truth
- "Definitely was thinking about doing a duet. I'm trying to figure out a verse to tie the two together and get a finished product out of them. Not sure yet how to end it. But eventually I'll post them as a finished product.
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Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Forgiven" by Ocean of Truth
- "Thanks It's paired with another write that I might eventually make into a song with the both of them, just like an all or nothing kind of thing. I'm glad I portrayed it well enough for people to notice it. I think a good song name would be like "Forgive or Forget""
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "Forgotten" by Ocean of Truth
- "If we spoke with our eyes, the only ones aware... you had me from that line on. Good job starting out solid and finishing strong."
Posted by Ocean of Truth on "What If..." by Temerity
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