'what's on your mind?'....'nothing, just thinking, is all....'

By Malice In Wonderland

It's going to be one of those nights
Where it hurts to breathe
[again]

And I'm lying through my teeth
Grasping at mirages
With broken fingers and punc.tured lungs

But your like music to my ears
Bearing gifts of false hope and lullabye...

But all good things, must come to an end.

The roach from an oversmoked joint slips from my fingers
The burn doesn't affect the deadened skin covering what can be considered little more then bone these days...

And the empty bottles littering the floor can only  rattle in protest at the slightest move
Encouraging only the deepening of this hole

And looking at you is like

+agony+

From the bottom of a well...

But it's better then nothing at all...



 

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2011 Rain In The Willows
Published on Wednesday, March 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "'what's on your mind?'....'nothing, just thinking, is all....'"

Log in to post comments.
  • A former member wrote: Agony is the key word here but, indeed its better to feel something then nothing. Can I hit that roach. It's been a while.

  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    i love your words, you write very well, you describe that place of desolation very well Scholar

  • JadedHeart On Friday, March 23, 2012, JadedHeart (18)By person wrote:

    I could really feel the pathos in this.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Friday, March 23, 2012, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    thanks, ladies, love you too*hugs* Scholar

  • punk mc cool On Monday, August 29, 2011, punk mc cool (74)By person wrote:

    dark mist of sadness, couldn't have been written more better.

  • A former member wrote: wow .. sorrow was like a black hole. i was sucked in right away. was almost painful. beautiful write.

  • Evil Ash On Saturday, July 23, 2011, Evil Ash (53)By person wrote:

    i feel sorrow ..excelent

  • A former member wrote: deafening pain... the silence is devastating. *hugs* even if i didn't love you, this piece would rip me to shreds. it is so human and exquisitely related. the detail is succinct and poignant.

  • A former member wrote: and that title... phew.

  • Ocean of Truth On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, Ocean of Truth (43)By person wrote:

    Wow this one really hits deep. Feels almost like I was there....

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, March 23, 2011, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    this hurt, like falling and having the wind knocked out of you... only to try to take a breath and have it sear through your chest... such sadness and aching... *hugs*

Contribution Level

Poets Bookmarking This Work
Malice In Wonderland's Favorite Poets
Malice In Wonderland's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.