-sympathetic

By Six-Out

[for the poets]

and those late nights- midnight dances with an old notebook
a pen that screams sanctuary to reality- if only for a bit
and the few scraps of paper. half written lines, never meant for words
thoughts that break/ an empty trace of logic
-listening to the rain. anything to find a little inspiration. just for tonight.

just for another line. a little more time and another tear to fill one more page
a few more overused emotions to go along with the pain
and another pen- to replace the one worn down. to tell of just one more
wasted life. just one more.
broken dream- another empty heart once too often shattered
and one more shaking hand to press this page
to tell of another useless moment

this is for you.


for the hopeless- that are never willing to die.
and the broken that will never stop pulling the pieces together
this is for you- and you alone.

for the tears that won't stop. and the rooms that are always too dark.
this is my useless moment- my pen to paper
for you

person to person. and heartache to heartache
from poet.to.poet

[this is for you]

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Copyright 2005 Six-Out
Published on Saturday, March 5, 2005.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love it, i read it a number of times and i can feel it because a number of times ive left round spots on my notepad ...but the inspiration behind it was unequal to my past ...but the release it great keep it up man

  • cre On Saturday, July 30, 2005, cre (411)By person wrote:

    I always come back to your words. You are one of the truest friends I have ever known. I want you to know how much I value that.

  • Six-Out On Saturday, July 30, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    You know I share the sentiments, sweets. I just hope you're doing ok.

  • DarkDruidess On Sunday, May 1, 2005, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    yeah I know I commented before but for some reason tonight this brought tears upon tears... Jon, thanks for the cleansing release of tears.

  • Lotophagi On Saturday, March 12, 2005, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    wonderful. as always. you rock my little world around man.... thank you.

  • Dei On Friday, March 11, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    gosh Jon!!! I read it like 3 times and i love it even more every time! this is so sweet and ... well the titale is perfect. well done

  • Dei On Friday, March 11, 2005, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    splendid. i always said you were a god amoung mice. this once more makes that statewment ring true

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    Some of the greatest moments are captured in our agony. You are one of the reasons I decided to join this site. You stir the poetry up a notch and you are not afraid to do so. Breathtaking. What more is there?

  • A former member wrote: I feel lucky that I read this. If that makes sense.. I'm envious of you, Jon.

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    man...such a truthful piece, spoken as only you could speak...just amazing..its like im looking in to a mirror, and im not the only one there.and i can actually see myself...you bring life to the shit that i write through this poem. thankyou

  • BeautifulCalamity On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    I really loved how you opened this, such a beautiful piece. perfect in everyway possible. ."and those late nights- midnight dances with an old notebook".. you , damn. . you're such an amazing writer.

  • A former member wrote: wow this was awesome man great job here i love how you exspressed yourself in this peice>

  • manywalks On Monday, March 7, 2005, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Yes, I think this should stay up. Reflective and beautiful.

  • cre On Monday, March 7, 2005, cre (411)By person wrote:

    Your words have become a quiet voice in my own dark room. For the moment I'm not feeling quite so alone - I hope you leave this up. It spoke so much to me.

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, March 6, 2005, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...this is one of the many examples of freewriting that I so royally suck at doing, yet you make it seem easy...I agree with the others; you should keep it up, not only as a work of brilliance, but as something for those that do need to see it... Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Sunday, March 6, 2005, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...sometimes the words alone give strength, and if you can do that to someone, you've achieved something far greater than one could ever wish; moving someone as such escapes my ability, but that doesn't mean I can't see when others do it... -Darun Scholar

  • A former member wrote: me too? aww..yer so sweet...heh...seriously, though, this is quite good: leave it up, please.. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: this was both beautiful and meaningful. i thoroughly enjoyed it. .........-samone Scholar

  • DarkDruidess On Saturday, March 5, 2005, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    thank you for your beautifully insightful words...

  • A former member wrote: Nicely said. And very much appreciated.

  • Whisper On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Whisper (112)By person wrote:

    This write is a perfect description. Wish there was more I could say. ~Matt~

  • A former member wrote: Thank you. ~Ryan

  • Solace On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    *smiles* brilliant work Jon...heartbreakingly beautiful...thanks :)

  • Lynaes On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    Yeah, what The Timness said.. Please don't kill it. "for the hopeless- that are never willing to die. and the broken that will never stop pulling the pieces together" ..how can words be so accurate? This is perfect Jon. damn

  • elisa On Saturday, March 5, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    you are true blue Jon... *smiles*...no doubt about it.......consider me extremely effected:*) elisa

  • blue On Saturday, March 5, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    No, don't kill it is right! This is great, truly a poets write. ~b

  • sIo On Saturday, March 5, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    i agree with tim. please leave this.-much love-

  • A former member wrote: awww Jon....this was sweet. How uncharactaristic of you >;) good write

  • Six-Out On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I don't know how long this will be up. Depends if I still like it in the morning.

  • suicideseason On Saturday, March 5, 2005, suicideseason (1639)By person wrote:

    don't kill it,please.

  • purr_verse On Saturday, March 5, 2005, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    From the opening line, this was magnificent. Please like it in the morning. It's got a nice little star next to it... *faves*


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