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To Love
By maddin foxxxy
I would love it if you came,
just as you are
designed by this imperfect world
with your dimples and the way
you stare.
I don't want to know about
your complicated ways
the stupid games
are not for me to play.
It used to be so simple . .
to say you'd love someone
until you already did
until you did.
I won't live this way..
hurried by your pace
dictated by time
judged
by what's your face.
I won't listen to this silence
clinging through my ear
It used to be so simple
to know i'd love someone
until I did.
I miss the you
that never was
I miss the me
that never is
And I'D love to love you
but i already did.
The world has gone wrong
ugly since so long
I couldn't see
through this fog.. .
there was no hope ---------------
only this
love
only love
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Copyright 2004 maddin foxxxy
Published on Monday, June 21, 2004.
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On Saturday, June 21, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359)
wrote:
Rings some harsh truths, this does... I love it.
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A former member wrote:
Wow. "Judged by what's your face" Why do I relate to that line so much? Hmmph. Anyways, back to reality. That was amazing. Took me to another place.
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
kick ass every time i read it -smph-
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A former member wrote:
wow that was touching!!!!
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On Saturday, October 16, 2004, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Very Touching. Too Much. GPhD.
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
the pathways that you show us are so intrisic and internal to you, there seems to be a tenderness that you impart to your word, showing an honesty few articulate or dare to show......well done.........urban
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On Monday, June 28, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
This is very touching and it's depth is endless. It portrays a heartfelt and clean emotion that only you could capture. Absolutely beautiful.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2004, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
Wow. This piece was so... piercing. Tragic and sincere. Honest. I felt it deeply and I loved every word of it... and I hated it's utter truth. Great job. -Glass
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
I don't know what to say.. after all of the comments I've left you, this one gives me trouble. I think the subject matter is too intense for me to recognize.. I'm weak that way.
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
Everyone of your writes has a distinct feeling to it... Its wildly intriguing with a tinge of mystery. I love getting to know you through your writes. :::OLd
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
so rad is this piece, i read it 3 times..the feelings conjured is over-whelming...it eats away the light until only a lurking tinge of sadness remains.awesome. -MeL-
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
maddin...this shocked me...I sit here nearly in tears, yet so full of something I don't know. This one is going to my favs list...maybe one of the million times I'm sure to read it, I'll leave an adequate comment.
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