Comments by jaunty pill
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There you are. :) I was beginning to think that you might have forgotten about my little side of the island. *Hugs tightly* Send me an e-mail sometime. I'd love to hear how you've been. :) And thank you. I am all red to be compared to Dali. LOL."
Posted by jaunty pill on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
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I don't know how I missed your comment. :( You are so kind and I can tell that you are also a thoughtful reader. I also find it hard sometimes to tie into a poem , Glad to see that this one could do that for you. Rare moment indeed. Hugs."
Posted by jaunty pill on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
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Thanks for always being a faithful reader Kiss. Everytime you stop in to something I do , I just feel all warm all over. Hugs."
Posted by jaunty pill on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
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I also like the ( of course ). Almost like a conscious-throw outloud. A little moment of clarity we didn't need to see , But why not. Wonderful word choices as well here. Again , Nice work."
Posted by jaunty pill on "The next one's a winner" by purr_verse
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Quirky. And I know what a poem turns into in the pockets of someone else..Would you like to know? Whitewash. That's right. Unique and absolutely well-done. This is a keeper indeed."
Posted by jaunty pill on "The next one's a winner" by purr_verse
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I also must mention that " silverbright " is a lovely combination...Which I often find in a lot of your work. It is nice to read you again. Often you leave me crippled. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "crush" by purr_verse
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I just wonder if it is a sin to indulge in such poetry today. ;) You always know how to strike a cord..Something near and dear to my own work. A female me maybe? Maybe not. Love it. Change nothing."
Posted by jaunty pill on "crush" by purr_verse
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We all feel this way sometimes...How can we ever surpass what has been done? It is overwhelming to find that individual voice...Sometimes it can take your breath away. Good use of direction and intrigue here. Wonderful."
Posted by jaunty pill on "ode to a sandwich" by doll on the rag
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Almost a violent and jutting use of words. The way they cut through the soul , The mind , It is an embodiment all its own. As ElegantKiss said: " Brilliant "...But I have to say , Yet again."
Posted by jaunty pill on "trees versus people" by doll on the rag
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Then we can be humbled both ways. I figured you were published. It shines in your work. I have added this poem to my page...Towards the bottom. I thought it would be a way for other people to come over. Take care and nice to meet you."
Posted by jaunty pill on "alanis song" by doll on the rag
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And seriously , This could be passed as something that could be published. The movement , The voice , The quick use of easy language....It all creates so much for the reader. I am humbled to have found you. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "alanis song" by doll on the rag
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Bookmarked. My third one so far around here. I seem to be picky about my bookmarks...Maybe a little too much. LOL. This is wonderfully worded and filled with moments that shine."
Posted by jaunty pill on "alanis song" by doll on the rag
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It's funny how you did my harder piece first. I am not sure why the simple direction in some of my poetry , Always gets the most interesting comments. I think the effiel tower is bigger than my cock though."
Posted by jaunty pill on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
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Blowing iron out my ass...I could have done that as well , But the prostitute really wasn't willing. Sadly. LOL. Thanks for your comment King. Most are afraid to get dirty. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
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It brings out detail and with a skillful poise that is rarely seen here or anywhere. I would call this genius , But that would be crude and unworthy. Just know that this has made my evebing. Fuck. I felt this one."
Posted by jaunty pill on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
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Your write rips and booms. A tremble that never ceases and manages to leave the reader breathless. When I read confessional poetry such as this , I tend to resolve. Awake , I guess you could say. Come to terms and face to face with many problems."
Posted by jaunty pill on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
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A few of the lines in this one would truly make some stark individual poems in themselves. Your words hit home for me , Bringing out my own conscious attempt to remain and stil understand myself. My flesh."
Posted by jaunty pill on ".silk.bullets. [rip me gently]" by Six-Out
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On the other hand , This can be taken to a literal end. A shock from the past ebbing back into our future..Wasting away the barren flesh that wears so thin upon us all. Like baby fat or the rinsed stuffing of an old chair."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Ignis Fatuus" by purr_verse
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The first stanza literally knocked my socks off. And not only that , But you did it with a talented pen. Your wording is original and , Somehow , Mellow and still alive. It invokes a clever appeal...A tragic frame caught in beauty. An eruption."
Posted by jaunty pill on "Ignis Fatuus" by purr_verse
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A good solid ending. You have a way with directional short writes. They seems to say so much in an immense and small space. It cooks up some thoughts that are perplexing and rare. Tempered and moody. Lovely. "
Posted by jaunty pill on "Dark Psalm" by elisa
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The first part is so original. The rhymes that are on top of each other and the way they work...Accute and startle. And I don't much like rhyme. It is short and proud. Defind and radiant. Lovely and well-written."
Posted by jaunty pill on "The Whole" by elisa
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