Comments by SilentStalker
- "…I have to come back to this to make a proper comment…for right now, all I can manage is thank you, so much, for writing this…"
Posted by SilentStalker on "ix: Albatross " by Feral
- "…this right here…speaks to me on levels that still hurt to talk about…this reminds me of the hungers, the never enoughs, the self-loathings and the dark places that we struggle to crawl out of, before they bury us completely…burn this out of me; I may not be strong enough to face this again and still be me…"
Posted by SilentStalker on "xviii: evocation" by Feral
- "...I think what catches my attention in many of your writes is how you try to add a lyrical element to them...this one in particular has an astounding "sing me" feel to it, that makes it so much more than a poem...anyone can write powerfully about almost any subject, but who can turn it into a true work of art...? this is what impressed me most..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Epilogue" by malevolencefixation
- "...more than likely our dogs dealt out some wrath to it before it escaped and died out in the large yard...a bit too big to imagine one of the neighbors' cats hunting it down...though, I did see one chasing down a bunny the other day... o.O"
Posted by SilentStalker on "(not playing) possum..." by SilentStalker
- "...if we're gonna start complaining about "not bad" being insulting, we might as well moderate half the comments off the site for being two words...slow your roll, chica, and let the author make that call...last I checked, they can delete their own comments if they dislike them... :D"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Creamy, White, in Secret" by lupus tenebrae
- "...it's mostly iambic, but you have the stresses marked reversely...if I were to read it with the bolds stressed, it would actually be Trochaic...and it would sound way weird...I can tear it apart for you, and show you which lines are perfect iambic, and which are not, if you want...but all in all, ignoring the formatting, you nailed most of it..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Untitled (Iambic Pentameter with Rhyming Couplets)" by BetaWolfinVA
- "...yeah, the latter part of my life so far, has been trying to get past most of my fears...part of me feels I'm on the right track of figuring most of them out... :)"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Crossroads" by SilentStalker
- "...I was here for not quite a month then, haha...back when some of the posts I was submitting, were writes of mine from 2-4 years prior, that I was filling in during creative dry spells...this one disturbed all but one of my so-called disturbed friends back in 2002...Stalker, got that last one, because, laughably, he couldn't stand the touching of feet..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "Lust for the Dead" by SilentStalker
- "...at least put enough thought into a plagiarism accusation to make it believable...not only did you make yourself look like an ass, now you just showed us that your friend copied one of our member's works...he might not like you anymore, but we'd appreciate it if you tipped us off again if he posts anything else... "
Posted by SilentStalker on "On Love" by MercyRain
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