My Broken China Doll
By SilentStalker
My broken china doll
Perfect in her own misery
Beautiful
in her disrepair
And amazing in her simplicity.
She spends all her time
Chipping away the ugly pieces
Discarding that which she does not want
Dropping it upon
the floor
And keeping only that which is acceptable
Until
that too, becomes ugly.
What she didn't see
Is that
I kept all the pieces.
The pieces that were still just as beautiful
as she
But not in her eyes, not the eyes that mattered.
I put them in a little box
And swore that one day
I'd show her just how beautiful they really were
How each
little piece she perceived defective
Made her all the more beautiful
And I dreamed I put my broken heart,
My broken soul,
All my flaws and scars
Into my broken china doll
I opened
up the box
and showed her the pieces
Setting them into
place
Securing each one with a smile
Until the box was
empty
And as I gazed upon her
Her eyes told me
She
finally knew she was beautiful.
For the first time
She
was finally happy
She was finally smiling
A smile that
reached into me.
And fixed my broken heart
My broken soul,
all my flaws and scars
And I was complete.
But when
I awoke
There was only the sound of chipping
Pieces, ugly
pieces
Falling to the floor
Only what was still acceptable
Was all that remained on her
Hardly anything left
And
inside the empty box
Were the words "I'm sorry"
And I
cried.
My beautiful broken china doll
Who I love in
all your imperfection
But every time a piece of my heart gets
chipped away
I remember what I'm truly fighting for.
One day I'll find the pieces
I swear I'll find them again
And I'll show you just how beautiful you are.
Author's Note:
for KelsiAwards
Comments on "My Broken China Doll"
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On Saturday, March 9, 2019, ADevilParadigm
(28) wrote:
I have to say I am impressed by this. I have someone I feel exactly this way about. Whom chips away at herself..tossing aside those pieces. She's always been divine to me. And I have tried to stitch her back together, Every Single Time that she breaks. If I had the ability, and money to put this on the front page again... I would. Because you...are beyond talented.
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On Friday, December 30, 2016, sIo
(898) wrote:
Still a gut wrenching tribute I'll enjoy forever. Couldn't have made a perfectly beautiful lady More beautiful but you did a damn fine job trying
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On Tuesday, January 6, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Beauty is worth of everyone, specially of the someone that doesn't know he possesses it. This was beautiful.
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On Tuesday, September 11, 2012, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
Must have been a special girl to make you write something like this. It really is beautiful.
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On Thursday, November 29, 2012, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...you should know, silly...
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On Sunday, February 26, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow!! A whole nother side to you ... amazing..
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
Still as amazing as ever. The emotion in this grips me and reminds me of a relationship I have with someone. A raw, powerful write. *swoons all over again*
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2011, ColorMeToxic
(238) wrote:
I almost cried while reading this...blown away.
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2011, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...I still do; don't feel bad... :)
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A former member wrote:
I loved it from beginning to end. You have a beautiful mind..amazing write :)
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On Thursday, March 17, 2011, Phalanx
(628) wrote:
When I read something like this I can't help but, ask questions about the characters involved, the motivation behind the beauty. The questions and sincere childlike love and compassionate devotion leaves me at a loss. This is among the most heartfelt and honest things I've read. With the utmost thanks, I Deeply appreciate you sharing this.
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On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Bravo... a masterpiece of emotion... this is really good my friend love the sorrow filled ending... thank-you