I love you to pieces

By Dommi

Always and forever
I promised to you
I'll hand you my heart
Of black and blue

I'll give you the night
Every diamond and star
Any treasure you want
It won't matter how far

I'll build you a castle
Away from all else
With nobody around
Just you and myself

I'd fill it with mirrors
To show you your face
This beauty I've found
Reflecting your grace

And at night in our bed
I would kiss you so softly
With every breath of pleasure
I'd take over your body

I'd confine you to me
With the finest red ribbon
I'd watch you all day
This prize I've been given

You're my favorite thing
And I won't give you up
Not even for sunlight
And the warmth of its touch

Your eyes screamed to me
I had sewn shut your mouth
You were starting to cry
I won't let you out

I unlocked the chains
That would bind you forever
Your body was shaking
Blood poured as I severed

We'll last for eternity
Within my own reason
You heart's in a jar
I loved you to pieces...

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Published on Saturday, May 22, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "I love you to pieces"

A former member wrote: Beautiful, full of deepest emotions and romantic.
A former member wrote: Wow.. Great piece! Love, obsession and a sinister mind.. What a mixture of topics to create a dark sick love story.. And your words flow naturally and vivid.. :)
A former member wrote: This piece, though short and sweet to be blunt, contains such an amount of emotion and intrigue that it is my favorite work so far. Thank you, Dommi. Pure genius, I would say.
A former member wrote: Very Macab my friend!!! Beautifully written!!
A former member wrote: This is one of the best one's I've read so far :) sweet and loving at first with a morbid twist. Great job.
On Monday, October 3, 2011, Hands_Around_My_Throat (67) wrote:

This was grimly fascinating. I thoroughly enjoy the morbidity, and the desire to have, conquer, and eventually destroy the topic of your obsession.
A former member wrote: The sudden turn of events and change of tone made me smile a devilish kind of smile. Especially since love is truly the only emotion that can't be overdone.
On Sunday, July 17, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Fuck Me!!! I love the fuck out of it! Hi! Dammmmn! Rock me steady I'm ready!!! Hell Yeah! I love this to pieces...
A former member wrote: this is one of the first poems i ever read on darkpoetry. i'm in love with this piece. i can't even think of anything clever or philosophical to say. i just needed to comment to let you know.
A former member wrote: Didn't see that coming... Love it.
On Saturday, April 23, 2011, Alexander (4) wrote:

yes, great stuff. somehow I wouldn't mind going out like this if the the woman truly loved me....
On Monday, February 7, 2011, Perkele (26) wrote:

It's a gory thing, love is
A former member wrote: I love this poem so very much. Love, passion, obsession, twisted commitment. It all swirls together into one of the best poems I've ever read.
On Tuesday, March 2, 2010, punk mc cool (74) wrote:

i really liked it....heart breaking >.
On Tuesday, March 17, 2009, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

This was great...twisted and powerful...-l-
A former member wrote: it starts out as a love poem ad i love the way love turns into lust into obsession in to psychosis into butchery.....i couldnt have done it any better.GOOD JOB
On Thursday, October 2, 2008, Lylani (112) wrote:

Amazing...I love the beautiful mix of passion and obsession, it flows so effortlessly to the darker side. A definite fave!
A former member wrote: Beautiful toxic words my friend. Just Beautiful.
A former member wrote: best poem ive ever read..yo!!
A former member wrote: Beautiful
A former member wrote: mysterious and captivating
A former member wrote: Intoxicating words, I relate, I adore, I love.
On Wednesday, November 28, 2007, Circe Avalon (115) wrote:

In the beginning it was mushy and super sweet. But In the end it was fan-fuckin'-tastic! Good write!
On Friday, November 16, 2007, Taunting The Reaper (169) wrote:

Divine extacy slathered on buttery flesh, a work of dark delights!
On Saturday, January 27, 2007, anakronistik_me (24) wrote:

beautiful. i love how it went from being like a romance novel to an episode of law & order. very well written. i really enjoyed it. -_ nakro_-
On Friday, November 17, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (93) wrote:

And people say i`m insane.You are but in a beautiful way*Elana*
On Saturday, February 25, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212) wrote:

i'm addicted to your poetry. ~lauren~
On Sunday, October 2, 2005, CrestfallenTears (17) wrote:

Oh wow, I like this...way deep!!!
On Monday, May 23, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

This is perhaps one of the best poems ever. Nice :)
On Wednesday, March 30, 2005, Dei (663) wrote:

this is way supberbly awsomly wow! lol for real. its good!
On Monday, January 24, 2005, flying_fox (571) wrote:

wow... great 180 turn in emotion and imagery. Great rhythm and onderful words... I loved "I'd confine you to me With the finest red ribbon". hmmmm I'm sitting here smirking and nodding my head. I really like this!!
On Monday, January 24, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69) wrote:

i liked that...twisted!--Steph