Comments by Lylani
- "Sad and sweet and very heartfelt, despite the pain in this piece, your strength and determination shines through. Keep fighting on for those good days. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by Lylani on "Falling Through Space" by BetaWolfinVA
- "I know this place too well, vividly rendered emotions, a great write, especially loved the lines "They began to scream angrily at me,
forcing me outward, feeding me to darkness." Such sublime imagery."
Posted by Lylani on "The Church Across the Street." by Pride Ed
- "clutching at darkness, so heartfelt and familiar, perfectly expressed, great write"
Posted by Lylani on "Empty Dark" by Scarrzz
- "Oh what a dream to dream, "And with the world, the man burnt to" such a beautiful and sad line, to sacrifice all hope and possibility for the longing for that half remembered moment of perfection"
Posted by Lylani on "Desire" by DavidVale
- "such a familiar feeling you capture so well, that sweet torturous longing of looking back on a past that can never live in the light again. Beautiful and sad, thank you for sharing, and nice to see you back "
Posted by Lylani on "Nocturnal Pleasure" by Leith Plunkett
- "spot on! all you ever want to give others is hope but all I want others to tell me is the bitter truth. We all want this ideal world for our kids but the real world is always there ready to get in the way. Brilliant and insightful as always "
Posted by Lylani on "A Walking Punchline" by veingo
- "I feel every line you've written. You deserve better, and I hope one day you find it. In the mean time, keep going!"
Posted by Lylani on "January 10th" by letitbe
- ""Like medicine with a warning label" thats the line that really sums it up for me. Really makes you think... but thinking too hard can make you miss out on the real rewards of feeling"
Posted by Lylani on "Love" by Labitina
- ""Hope has become a thing of the past, So forgotten that when spoken it is a hollow word" - an absolute killer of a line, fantastic"
Posted by Lylani on "The Truth" by pureevil8
- "This sounds so familiar, this feeling. The internal contradiction of showing the world all is well coupled with that need to be painfully honest, but having no one care enough to notice. really well captured"
Posted by Lylani on "For All You Know" by Ultimate Mistake
- ""A little too sane fore craziness" love this line, but fantastic piece all round"
Posted by Lylani on "*howling" by Sketso
- "this made my skin crawl and made me feel far to exposed, you captured exactly how I feel right now but that I didn't have the words to say. "But lies can be beautiful things" - far too true. Thank you for writing this"
Posted by Lylani on "Beautiful Transgressions." by Echoes of Orpheus
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