Love or Lust? For A Succubus

By TyrantAvDetForbannet

Beautiful demoness, your skin is so cold

I'd gladly shed my blood for you to keep you warm

Your eyes too, speak of what i hold

A heart of stone, that you try to tempt me with your wicked form

How strange...

When I'm with you...I'm still alone

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Copyright 2011 TyrantAvDetForbannet
Published on Sunday, May 15, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    I can't always tell if it's love or lust either. I know that we artists do fall in love more often. Sometimes, though it's an illusion. And sometimes, I feel so shallow for the misconception. I like that you expressed these very thoughts and emotions within your writing. :)

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    I love when someone manages to pack so much into so few words, beautiful ode to a femme fatale.

  • Nehema On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Where have you been? I just found you cuz you logged on, I hope you are staying, I like your style. I'll be reading through more of you today ;) Welcome home - XXOO Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Wednesday, July 11, 2012, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Thank you for the warm welcome, I cant wait till everyone find's out i'm back. I look forward to your imput on my other works. You rock!

  • A former member wrote: to want something so badly yet still not feel any different once you have it

  • terris crimson On Thursday, February 2, 2012, terris crimson (167)By person wrote:

    my story over and over again. love it. this is amazing.

  • A former member wrote: How cruel that feeling must be. I feel most of us can relate.

  • RubyXero On Sunday, January 15, 2012, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    what depth this held for 6 lines... and so true as well. ^*_*^ loved it!

  • AllenTaylor On Thursday, December 1, 2011, AllenTaylor (39)By person wrote:

    Sucking the life right out of us...Left out to dry. I like this. A lot.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, December 1, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Absolutely! seem's to be the story of our lives at times.

  • Lylani On Thursday, December 1, 2011, Lylani (112)By person wrote:

    There's so much in these few lines, if only we could choose our feelings instead of being at their mercy. But then again if we could, would we? when poetry renders torture like this beautiful

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, December 1, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    very insightful, and wellsaid. you are definately wise.

  • heterodynemind On Tuesday, November 29, 2011, heterodynemind (10)By person wrote:

    Have always been intrigued with the concept of Succubus and Incubus. This is a great write, the ending is perfect.

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, November 15, 2011, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    this is so captivating...the mysteriousness....

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Mysterious as the pisces are.

  • Devilish On Sunday, September 25, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Damn I forgot how much i loved this... Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    And i forgot how much i loved that.

  • A former member wrote: nice..it really makes the reader think and is well put.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    I like to provoke thought.

  • Devilish On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Hmmm! Oh how sweet the feel! Hello there... I love reading your work! It has a kiss to it that leaves me wanting more but at the same time i'm satisfied... How strange yet erotic! Scholar

  • Ladyhawke On Monday, May 16, 2011, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Wow, this is so amazing! The feelings of your love betraying you and leaving you cold, when clearly your love is as powerful as the sun. . .great write. Welcome to DP:)

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Exactly lady hawke.

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    i'm glad you understand and enjoy.

  • A former member wrote: wow, i'm really entertained you should do a follow up and tell me more :) PLZZ! sounds kinda like me

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    thank you!

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