A Walking Punchline
By veingo
There are things my parents didn't tell me.
And now I wish they
had..
Like,
You can be good,
and still be treated badly.
You can be friendly, and still not
have a friend.
You can never give up, and still not be the winner.
You can tell the truth, and still be called a lier.
You
can be an honest person, and people still won't trust you.
You
can have a positive outlook, and still have bad things happen.
You can be attractive, and still not have a date to the dance.
You can be kind and giving, and still have people hate you.
You can work harder than the rest, and still make less money.
You can be the best worker, and still not get the permotion.
You can hope and pray, and still not get what you want.
You
can give your everything, and still not be appreciated.
You
can be loyal and loving, and still get cheated on.
You can be
a good husband, and still get divorced.
You can be attractive,
and still be made to feel ugly.
You can be surrounded by loved
ones, and still be lonely.
You can be the most giving person,
and people will still steal from you.
You can obey the laws,
and still have legal troubles.
You can work 3 jobs, and still
end up bankrupt.
You can be a good father, and still have your
children hate you.
I wish my parents had told me
these things,
but I can't bring myself to tell my children either.
Lately when I tell people about my life, they seem to be
poised
as if waiting for the punchline.
It's nice
to meet you...
Here I am...
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Comments on "A Walking Punchline"
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A former member wrote:
I have the same problem with my children. Who wants to inform their children that this world is just as unjust to the ones who obey all? Certainly not I. I will let their faith and innocence guide them until the truth shows for itself. Simple point, brilliant write!
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A former member wrote:
The cynical reality is never something we want to share with children...to preserve that spark in them, perhaps, the belief in goodness itself, when the world can be so terrible... Great write.
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A former member wrote:
this is so bleak but so true. I feel this way myself pretty often..especially the parts about how hard you can work and pretty much get nothing. I wish you didn't feel this, but I am glad to see you write again..you have such a fantastic straightforward style that always grabs me. I love you.
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On Thursday, February 16, 2012, Lylani
(112) wrote:
spot on! all you ever want to give others is hope but all I want others to tell me is the bitter truth. We all want this ideal world for our kids but the real world is always there ready to get in the way. Brilliant and insightful as always
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
Amen and holly-loo-juh to this!
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On Monday, February 13, 2012, Clydes_Bonnie
(53) wrote:
intriguing..so very true. This really got me thinking. Maybe too much lol..damn you. Thanks I enjoyed this!
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A former member wrote:
Awsome write ... I can totally relate wish my parents told me that shit too but it helps with your parents give a damn in the first place. But it deff captivated me. Awsome job!
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On Sunday, February 12, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Daddy was a bad man and left us all alone to make the best of it, and he needs help. He never cared about us! What mothers tell the kids should be outlawed, especially when they are young and impressionable. Goes with the territory, sorry V. - good write, thanks.
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On Sunday, February 12, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
so many lines i can relate to .. sad but true very nice writing ..
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On Sunday, February 12, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
You can be a good father, and still have your children hate you...... aww