You should know...
By Narcissa
You came bearing flowers
Replacing the reaper
With two blue irises
To see past death
You called upon walking giants
To storm across desolate plains
And fought a fortress of
Silent snipers
And yet still
I wonder
How did you get in here?
Hush now.
The natives are sleeping
And when they see their towers torn
And deprived of stone
It won't be just me alone
I will rebuild with your flame
In my heart
For your outstretched hand
Has been de.light.ful
But before I go
I must thank you
... Ill keep a part of me open now
and ill wait
till the world gives up
or we do....
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© 2008 Narcissa
Published on Sunday, June 8, 2008.
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
hush now.... oh, I will have to be hushed... nothing I can say to do this justice.
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On Friday, October 1, 2010, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
Enjoyable read this proved to be :) Thanks for posting ~Ash
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On Thursday, August 14, 2008, thelostmessenger
(110) wrote:
wow. htis is spoken beautifully. i love the last stanza and how its so finalizing. tragic.
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On Tuesday, August 12, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Back again... still love this
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On Thursday, June 19, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
It's only been 11 days, but its already time for a reminder of how much I love this piece...
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On Tuesday, June 10, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
... what can I say that hasn't already been spoken? consider me speechless ...
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
This is simply spot on, bang on, perfecto :) Clarity of heart rings and reins true with this poem. Brilliantly wrought.
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
this my dear, sparks the flame of a muses heart -symph-
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, snakeskingrin
(59) wrote:
I like the atmosphere this piece invokes...cool stuff.:)Snake
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A former member wrote:
*joins ppr in huggles* perfect once again
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, Withering petals
(65) wrote:
deep and entrancing. Nice work ~Downstream~
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A former member wrote:
*huggles narcissa* i love it.
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A former member wrote:
An ancient portrayal of conditioned hearts ducking and weaving through thick and thin in order to bring a result, of which only will surfice if the heart is content with its efforts...Excellence.
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
You did it again... *faves* I don't even know how to describe it.
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On Sunday, June 8, 2008, veingo
(526) wrote:
Beautiful. ^V^