Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed.
By Aleas
Go.
Where hope
Resonates footsteps slow approach
Where silence dares not encroach
Upon whispered halls and ways
Of sounds heard and said
A millenia before
Where right doesn't belong
And wrong is always left
Reeling between
The skin of our feet
And a breath-taking
Life-ending
Drop out beneath
Where the songs we play
Titillate
And swirl bee lines
Of untold shapes divine
Bringing nectar to the ears of
She who no longer hears us
Without root or reason
Or knowledge of the past
Or fear of the present
Because if the future was always bright
Then who cares what's right
When wrong doesn't belong
When the answers are
Sly smiles of
Fingers' slender holding
Those same one million eyes
That will never close on me
And all of this
Summits
Above an enigmatic release
Of love without mercy
Though not entirely focused
But increasingly and certainly
Undaunted
Unwanted
And regrettably
Unnoticed.
Where is this place for you?
**Thank you to Narcissa for inspiring this idea.
Awards
Comments on "Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed."
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On Wednesday, September 3, 2014, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
i love the words, and the shapes
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On Wednesday, February 25, 2009, whisperer
(166) wrote:
beautifully worked, like a silver inlaid axe to the temple
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On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
Im glad you were able to retrieve your old works...this is still one of my favs.
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On Friday, July 4, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
I call it "Heavens Peak"... ;). I agree with both guys... another piece Ill love to ponder from a talented poet. I can't stop reading this...There isn't a line here that doesn't speak to me on a personal level...and I am thrilled that the picture spoke to you as it did me.
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A former member wrote:
Ocean flow and points a-plenty, each taken in...a bit of porch time required to ponder this, very nice mate.