& love limps from your eyes .
By Corinthian
Wishes
drop through the air ...
Carelessly
dressed
with snow-lit eyes
hanging slender
strings and blue stars
in your weak candle light
*I dont know ,
I just dont know .. what this feeling is
I hope that we are okay*
...
...*I can
:not sleep now*
so on my sheet I wrote this_
....
This is the slo.west kiss
Laced boots and
shallow coat
Clinging together
tight with ribbons
and foreshadowing light
Im very fond of your
un.innocent
caress
blue rain curtains
shimmering your
stone.
indigo .
manger
and
tears
they will
live forever on my fingertips ..
as they shiver from
raven.crowned
white-gold eyes....
*trembling
tinta lips* on shining hips ....
falling...
...
......
chimes of star
and
we were like
bats with silent steps
on lavender mud
and burgundy clover
behind this undissolved
red lion sun
And....
I think I will keep
on dreaming until I find a reason to wake up*
Author's Note:
From Ballerina ... to Pagan *~Comments on "& love limps from your eyes . "
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A former member wrote:
your mind is gem...black diamonds...piece sucks anyone in...love the style
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On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Star
(920) wrote:
cori of what poems i have read of yours, every single one is beautiful in their own way...you have a way with words that make this beautiful...and i loved this one great write here (:
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On Thursday, August 16, 2012, Corinthian
(309) wrote:
Thankyou sweetheart that means alot to me.
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On Saturday, October 22, 2011, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
I loved the descriptive imagery in this. Color gets thrown around alot in poetry to ignite the senses but you knew exactly how you wanted the image to blossom.
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, whisperingwalls
(219) wrote:
I loved the way these words played out, such a unique angle to refresh the multitude of poems that crawl with a simailar subject. Really enjoyed this; different.
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, Lylani
(116) wrote:
From the first line I was captivated, and feeling this poem so much right now. speak softly, tread lightly or the fragile balance will shatter
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A former member wrote:
i've missed your words corinthian, the way you play with colors in your attempt to convey. no one does it quite like you do. "this is the slowest kiss, laced boots and shallow coat" something about these lines grabbed me. just an interesting way to capture a moment as contrasted with your usual cosmic imagery.
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On Thursday, October 20, 2011, dwells
(4285) wrote:
I hate to wake up from a good dream. For a while I was writing down what I could remember - but still didn't make much sense. Don't be a stranger, thanks.