What I Love About You
By SilentStalker
You asked me time and time again, what I
like about you
The things that over such hard times has kept my love so true
And so I have compiled a list of things that I adore
That if you could not share with me, my life would be a bore...
I love the way you look at me;
I love the way you smile
I love the way you speak to me
and hold me all the while
I love the way you help me out
and keep me in my place
I love the way you sleep with such
a cute smile on your face
I love the way you jump into
my arms when you get scared
I love the times that I hold you
when you just washed your hair
I love you when you tread me bad
I love it when you're nice
I love when you look up to me
and ask me for advice
I love the way you make me laugh
I love the way you cry
I love the way you scold me when
you catch me in a lie
I love you when you make me mad
I love you when you scream
I love it when I fall asleep
and see you in my dream
I love the funny face you make
whenever you're confused
I love the way you laugh out loud
whenever you're amused
I love the times you hold my hand
when we go on a date
I love the funny way you look
when you sleep in too late...
And there are all the simple things that make our times so sweet
You make me feel like I am whole; you keep me on my feet
I cannot ask for any more than all that we now share
For you've already blessed my life by simply being there.
Comments on "What I Love About You"
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A former member wrote:
this is so sweet... I love it....
awesome poem
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A former member wrote:
Truly beautiful and romantic. :)
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On Thursday, August 30, 2012, Invisible Girl
(134) wrote:
I love this poem! A very sweet side of you Darun :)
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On Saturday, February 27, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Awwww epically romantic.
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On Saturday, July 24, 2010, gnrrain
(19) wrote:
Agreed. Epic in that almost everyone can relate to most if not all written here.
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On Sunday, August 16, 2009, BrokenButterflyWings
(33) wrote:
Beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
These words are simply heartbreaking. I think, no, I Know many people can relate to this including me, except the fact i'm single now...
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On Monday, December 17, 2007, Mari
(419) wrote:
beyond sweet. priceless
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On Friday, September 1, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
caught in a moment of silence....the daily axe grind [frozen] in a vacuum -the way you frame the face of love...so very intimate.
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A former member wrote:
i loved the last four lines the most
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On Saturday, May 27, 2006, Vexed
(74) wrote:
completely blew me away...it was so sweet that I almost thought a female wrote it...it was so sweet that it almost made me cry...it reminded me of the poem from the movie "Ten Things I Hate About You" I think I will bookmark it...
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
hehe i think i read this before but i'm not too sure.. it's cute, made me smile.. nice job
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
wow.....i should expect the unexpected...but this was like finding a cavern full of precious gems....you are amazing
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
very touching. I am glad you shared. :::OLd
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
aww the stuffing inside the psycho bear...nice to know behind every shield there is a body...Loved this piece Darun...*smooch* *Vel*
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Liz
(265) wrote:
So killing bitches isn't the only thing that makes you all warm and fuzzy, eh? You see there, I knew you weren't just a creepy necrophiliac. This is a wonderful write, you kept going where I would have run out of steam, and closed beautifully.
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A former member wrote:
yeah as said above...sweet.....it's that a guy can actually write things like this down....right on
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A former member wrote:
Awww...I haven't read this one before. It's so sweet. LOL...Yep, I think you're losing axe points as I type this. Really though...this is...awww...lol
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On Thursday, November 6, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...yeah...one reason I was contemplating not posting these...oh well...even the axeman has a heart somewhere...haha...