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Comments by gnrrain

"It's a good write but I think you changed the flow a few times. I agree with many points discussed and hope people are willing to read and learn about what they believe in."
Posted by gnrrain on "Sermon (a rhyming rant at Catholics and Christians)" by shadowsinthelight

"Oh how nice would so much of this be if you could actually do it? Awesome write, thanks for sharing."
Posted by gnrrain on "Within Your Eyes" by liquid_emotion

"That was great, I've been there more than is like to admit ha."
Posted by gnrrain on "Fuck You and Your Slushy" by darkness_descends

"This is one of the best reads I've read so far. Great visuals, good word placement, very nice work indeed."
Posted by gnrrain on "Twenty Dollars" by AbjectColloquialist

"Agreed. Epic in that almost everyone can relate to most if not all written here. "
Posted by gnrrain on "What I Love About You" by SilentStalker

"Beautiful write. Last stanza was an excellent way to end it. "
Posted by gnrrain on "Feathers Of Smoke" by Dommi

"Nicely done, short, to the point, yet maintaining a sadness throughout."
Posted by gnrrain on "the stars the moon and the midnight sky (beggining to our end)" by Darkest_Addiction

"Beautifully written, such a personally inviting work. The descriptions are great and thank you for posting this. --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "When Lucifer Visits a Mortal Girl" by melodies revisited

"The description is wonderful and it definitely gives you an idea of what you yourself was seeing when you were writing. Well done. --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "Apostles of Darkness" by Riven Waker

"My younger brother is currently in Iraq and this definitely makes a very outright and scary statement. I like that it's very dry and serious and to the point. Well done friend and if you are in some branch of the military please be careful. There are people here that thank you for your work at your office. Thank you --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "Another Day at the Office" by Soldier Of Silence

""Your policies and your regulations. Your hypocritical masturbations" Exquisite. Period. --David-- "
Posted by gnrrain on "Dry House" by skully

"Honestly, situationally this was absolutely adorable. --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "Clouded Mind" by Foreverlost28

"Regardless of the context, the message is clear. Interesting use of rhyme though. --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "Emo Song" by Nail Bunny

"I was definately entranced throughtout the whole thing. --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "The Man Whom God Forgot" by shadowsinthelight

"Flowed wonderfully. --David--"
Posted by gnrrain on "Missionary Position" by Stranger

"Thanks for the welcome Ariel, and i don't think it's odd at all about what you were picturing, it can be viewed as a person or thing depending on what you can relate the words to from your own mind :)"
Posted by gnrrain on "My Valentine" by gnrrain

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