Within Your Eyes

By liquid_emotion

I want to breathe you in
Crawl inside your head
Walk around for hours
Exploring thoughts unsaid

I want to taste your fear
And swim inside your eyes
Wrap up in your soul
And feel your anger rise

I want to lick your pain
Bathe in all your tears
Suffocate with memories
You’ve gathered through the years

I want to kiss your depth
And wallow in your sin
Feeling every single thing
You’ve ever felt within

I want to touch your anger
Linger in your pride
Soaking up the hatred
You buried deep inside

I want to smell your secrets
Inhaling all the lies
Relish in contentment
That floats apon your sighs

I want to hear your love
Trail fingers down your dreams
Soak my feet in happiness
Of endless laughter streams

I want to see your turmoil
Get lost inside the lust
Piled up in corners
Collecting passions dust

I want to grasp your innocence
Submerge inside your guilt
Tremble with perceptions
That I have never felt

I want to caress your consciousness
And lay beside your cries
Tremble with your presence
Engulfed within your eyes

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Published on Wednesday, February 26, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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On Friday, August 16, 2019, MistyMilkyways (14) wrote:

Wow... Exhilerating and ravenous... Does she still write?
On Tuesday, February 23, 2016, Noel Haiasi (35) wrote:

After reading this, I must say I was left stunned. This flowed so well and each line sent a chill down my spine. Amazing job on this one.
On Monday, January 5, 2015, Nimue44 (289) wrote:

Holy willows. Every word in this is just perfect, and the title suits the poem perfectly. The pace is exquisite. Brava!
On Saturday, August 10, 2013, jennifer atwood (12) wrote:

are you a scorpio? I really likeyour poem flows your poem and can relate. I like the way
On Tuesday, January 15, 2013, MorganaRose (75) wrote:

This has such wonderful imagery! It's a brilliant write...left me wanting to read so much more... I didn't want it to end. Thanks for sharing.
On Thursday, August 12, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

There is so much to see within the eyes..this was a sensory adventure on all six's ..360 ride..I enjoyed it all throughout ,left me wanting more..great job in this masterpiece.."Bathe in all your tears"..what a sight
On Saturday, July 24, 2010, gnrrain (19) wrote:

Oh how nice would so much of this be if you could actually do it? Awesome write, thanks for sharing.
A former member wrote: i love this poem . all i can say is that i wish i would have wrote it. this poem describes all my feelings for the guy i love.
On Wednesday, March 10, 2010, Wiccad (124) wrote:

That was awesome, it flowed so well together, easy to read and just wonderful.Write on.
A former member wrote: Wow! I love it! I love the depth, and the detail to description. Love it!
On Tuesday, September 15, 2009, Butterfly (99) wrote:

Still to this day one of my singular favorite pieces.
On Friday, February 29, 2008, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

eloquent and insightful......your words dwell within strong emotion..........well done my friend............urban
A former member wrote: wow... penetrating, the depth of imagination, the sense that each stanza brings... so thoughtful, so beautiful
On Friday, December 8, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (62) wrote:

took my breath a way.........LOVE IT
On Monday, November 13, 2006, darth ren (30) wrote:

this is so amazing. i am not worthy of commenting !!!!!!111111
A former member wrote: being able to read this stuff is what I love about this site.. I simply loved it
A former member wrote: Beautiful, very well done. I goes in my favorites. -Anton
On Thursday, July 14, 2005, Butterfly (99) wrote:

You know this poem was the first ever poem I read on this site and fell in love with it. It's been on my faves list for a long time and i don't think I have ever commented on it. Such a great write. Made me want to write to this standard.
On Monday, May 16, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple (39) wrote:

Jesus, i read this before i bacame a dp member and now it mean s more to me than it did before. This is just downright amazing.
A former member wrote: absolutely amazing. -heather lynn
A former member wrote: beautiful.
A former member wrote: This one made me think of a certain someone.........
A former member wrote: this is beautiful.. and though i shy away from rhyme you use the right words so that the rhythm swallows the rhyme and it doesnt ruin the peices potential. good write!
A former member wrote: I love it. Quite intriguing
On Friday, July 16, 2004, smurfalwaz (13) wrote:

This has been a fav. for some time now and I am just now getting around to saying that I really enjoyed this poem.-Smurf
On Monday, July 5, 2004, violetflames (10) wrote:

yeah, a masterpiece most def. I am thankful that I've stumbled upon this one. I love it!
A former member wrote: This is a masterpiece...keep up the good work. \m/ Mandy Lyn--
On Sunday, June 13, 2004, Heart of Stone (24) wrote:

This is amazing. I can feel it. I feel these unreal actions. I love this. Def. a Favorite now! -Heart
On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

Simply beautiful...I feel like I am missing something after reading a poem this beautiful.~Mikey
A former member wrote: I think everyone else has said every compliment there is to say, you already know that this poem is awesome, so just add me to the list, awesome shit
On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214) wrote:

I liked the whole poem except for "I want to lick your pain" for some reason lick seems out of place. I can't currently think of anything better though.
On Sunday, March 7, 2004, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

Ever seen animals licking thier wounds? Same concept.... I think it works fine.
On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, Dekika (7) wrote:

Wow, I'm not even sure what else to say. This is so awesome, no, that's an understatement. This has to be one of the best poems I've ever read. You have a great talent, run with it!!!
A former member wrote: awesome
A former member wrote: This was FUCKING the shit!.....I wish i wrote this!(jealous)....I want to do the same to one "in the past"....awesome job!
A former member wrote: nice its always nice to want to know sombody that close
On Friday, December 12, 2003, Jaded Jezzabelle (328) wrote:

this is so very beautiful...the flow the content everything came together to form a perfect vision of what real love really is
A former member wrote: awsome it sayz alot !
On Sunday, July 13, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

I liked it a lot. You put this in a way I don't think anyone could do better! Very Nice and Keep Writing.
A former member wrote: Delicious, absolutely delicious what you have captured right here. Wish someone could write something even REMOTELY like that for me. I felt your emotion. Wonderful! -SP
A former member wrote: Nice..very deep. I liked it very much :) thx ~evil_bitch~
A former member wrote: I LOVE your poem it puts in words every thing I want to do to my lover.It is a truely amazing piece!
A former member wrote: word on
On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Sky Singer (153) wrote:

if i had to chose an overall favortie piece in my list, this would be the one... you have SUCH a talent and you put something (a feeling, emotion, i'm not sure what) into words that i could not... absolutely outstanding
On Saturday, April 26, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

I really appriciate that, thank you:)