Comments by ubiquitoussoul

  • "suddenly you've extracted from me such heavy emotion I'm not to familiar with... saying that this piece transfixed me into your method of coping.. this was composed very well..you are the artist painting the sun where everyone was clouded..crowded..I could never devise the effect of a lost one..tried playing it in my mind in a troubling time.. I see you are a good hearted person ..I imagine this task with difficulty but Im unsure.. it hit a dark place within and I only hope we continue to accept were not perfect.. I say great punctuation made it enjoyably smooth reading...each line is worth its capturing utterance... thanks for the braveness,i hope for the best"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "If I Say It, That Makes It Real" by RoseTheBrokenHearted
  • "brilliant. this is my favorite of the parodies... it feels like looking up at a glow in the dark ceiling and stealing a dream from the planets posters..im stoned but I could say this rides like a midnight jaguar ,,,online dating haven't tried it? maybe goes well as this poem does as grape on the jelly toast.. or buttery roast! sweeeeeet,, "
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "constellations touch" by King_Crazy_Dave
  • "this poem is fantastic..the beat..the content like music to my ears ..so heavy and pressing..smoother than licked moonlight by the sweating heart"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Godly Men" by Rowan
  • "momentous mellow walk with your great laden voice.. brought down the sky to pace your successions cool careful fluidity..contemplation crafted excellence the rhythm and word choice. made me think on a personal lever and reflect as well within the image.. really enjoyed the read.thanks for posting !.... steps back into the white noise"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Inhibited " by FearlessDragon
  • "this is super sweet.. assuring,honest ....a great heart speaking. at first I imagined an unborn girl but authors comment made me wow..i'm positive you will be awesome to her.all the best to you...fav part reading over is the shoulder ride!"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "My (?) Beautiful Angel" by BetaWolfinVA
  • "This I've read countless times...It completely engulfs me.. so well structured for each set flows into the next with ease..the ambiance surrounds and envelopes..naturally..till we are in complete betrayal of a presumed expectation..killed by a laden emotion..thank you"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Teahouse" by Sin Amor
  • "the moon blue moth..the holy water baptismal even. ..like a memory unfolding..a day to remember enveloped in this night of a poem.. hues of blue,ivory and sunless walks..enchanting in the journey..sight and sounds to sleep...."
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Aristotelis " by Corinthian
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