Comments by MorganaRose
- "It seems inappropriate that I never commented on the write that started it all. Reading this always takes me back to day one and reminds me that... You're My... I'm so grateful that you wrote this poem.
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Posted by MorganaRose on "You're My....." by Peyton1
- "I came back to this today and realized just how truly flawless it's flow is. I will always envy this write and how it envelops me every time I read it. xo"
Posted by MorganaRose on "Your Final Minute" by Peyton1
- "I find that loneliness and quiet go hand and hand more often than not. It's amazing what a person can keep quiet. It seems that you have a great pen to put quiet emotions onto paper with your vivid language. I look forward to more from you.
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Posted by MorganaRose on "Doubt" by SilenttPerception
- "As I read this it melted into me like my own thoughts. I can identify all too much with this constant contradiction..."of fire and of the sea" and the "war with desire and reality". The descriptive language you used melded this together beautifully. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Somewhere New" by SilenttPerception
- "I feel such a heavy heart weaving these words and a desperate longing spilling out between the lines. I know, all too well, the mourning of who you were colliding with who you are to be. From lips of satin to an open grave, your imagery pulled me into this journey with you. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Untitled #34" by rwb35
- "I like that this is written in stream of thought rather than format. It really gives it more nostalgia and power that way. The sense of longing seems to emanate from every word..."
Posted by MorganaRose on "I miss you" by Desi VS The World
- "This is amazing...it seems so effortless...flowing perfectly. There is so much lost hope that spills out in these lines...so mournfully that it consumes you as you read. It's resolute and lost mingling together so well.
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Posted by MorganaRose on "You Would Be Me" by Peyton1
- "This brought back memories...I've had several people in my life that I have felt this way about. Is it really worth it? When they tell you that they only made it this far because of you...I think it is. It's sad to see them go...but some only have one path to choose. Thank you for sharing this. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Many are Called, Few are Chosen" by The Guardian Angel
- "This line resonates with me..."How do I love thee, dark days?
Let me count the lovely shades"... You have a talent for vivid imagery that makes me jealous! I see the fall...and the pieces that cut and burn to fall with you...come out in every line. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "We All Fall Down..." by Peyton1
- "The dark possession here on several levels is quite enticing. I love the dark twisted writes that you do...they are amazing...consuming. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Death Ryder" by Peyton1
- "I absolutely love how vivid this is! I just get drawn in...and most of the time can't decide if I want to be the stalker or the prey...guess that's just me though! I love that you never really know the prey...it makes it easier for it to become each different readers fear...for it to grab everyone differently. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Your Final Minute" by Peyton1
- "This is amazing. The emotions so powerful...the imagery just sucking you into it...like you yourself will fall. It's executed brilliantly!"
Posted by MorganaRose on "...If I...Crash..." by Peyton1
- "There's always a constant struggle between head and heart...and I can relate to that. It's lovely when the heart can win. I love that these few lines can have so much meaning. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "I got This..." by Peyton1
- "This was so wonderful crafted. It flows beautifully as if the words just came crying out...the format so natural and so powerful to your words. Every image was so vivid that it seemed to twist my heart to the rhythm of your words."
Posted by MorganaRose on "'Leaving Hope' behind..." by Peyton1
- "Your dissection of emotions lead to realization...leading to strength. An empowering write with a great flow.
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Posted by MorganaRose on "Moving On " by Jennanselmo
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