You're My.....

By Peyton1

Who are you?.....Well, let me tell you.

You're my
laughter when I'm feeling sad
You're my
happy when life makes me mad

You're my
quench for an insatiable thirst
You're my
best when I'm at my worst

You're my
smile instead of my usual frown
You're my
right side up when I'm upside down

You're my
ray of sunshine in a winter blizzard
my eye in any hurricane
You're my
heat in bitter cold keeping me warm
my calm before every storm

You're my
sweetest darkness just before each light
You're my
only reason for still putting up a fight

You're my
Prometheus, the one that gave me this fire
You're my
oasis in this desert, a mirage worthy of desire

You're my
everything, without you I'm lost and nothing
You're my
royal straight flush and I'm not EVEN bluffing

Can't you see?.......

You're my

clear line of sight thru life's thick, dark haze

You're the One

I long to be beside for the rest of my days.....

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2014 Peyton1
Published on Sunday, July 20, 2014.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

3:10am I awoke from a dream....and decided to write this down.... just realized, it's not fantasy
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "You're My....."

Log in to post comments.
  • MorganaRose On Wednesday, September 21, 2016, MorganaRose (75)By person wrote:

    It seems inappropriate that I never commented on the write that started it all. Reading this always takes me back to day one and reminds me that... You're My... I'm so grateful that you wrote this poem.

  • Peyton1 On Thursday, April 4, 2019, Peyton1 (181)By person wrote:

    What started out as sarcastic fantasy, has become a whirlwind of truth for the ages! Never would I have imagined a poem of my writing could spark this life so profound. Thank you for making those first comments on my poems, that was what started it all........................ ~Your Ace~

  • A former member wrote: Really beautiful... It's a great thing when we find that special one to share our life :)

  • Peyton1 On Sunday, July 6, 2014, Peyton1 (181)By person wrote:

    Thank you Darkisses for reading and for the comment. A great thing to find indeed, or at least that's surely how it seems.....but this fantasy is never to be fulfilled, as well none of the other nice dreams..... Fate has dealt my final hand, look at that, not even a pair to be seen................................... ~ACE~

  • blue angel On Friday, July 4, 2014, blue angel (906)By person wrote:

    I love the repetition of the heart, and I love the 3 am/ dream inspirations. Very sincere penning. You are certainly a man that keeps his focus steady and true. :) thanks for sharing and for commenting on mine. !!

  • Peyton1 On Friday, July 4, 2014, Peyton1 (181)By person wrote:

    Steady and true....... yes ma'am, a curse I have tried multiple times to rid myself no avail, sadly. Hey, I just described my entire life, "to no avail", I think I'll have that tattooed across my forehead. Thanks for the comment miss Kendra, always a pleasure my dear.......................... ~ACE~

  • blue angel On Friday, July 4, 2014, blue angel (906)By person wrote:

    oh and how could I forget, HAPPY 4th of JULY !! :)

  • Peyton1 On Friday, July 4, 2014, Peyton1 (181)By person wrote:

    And happy 4th of July holiday wishes to you too! I hadn't heard from you in a while now.... Been wondering how you were doing. Thanks for dropping by, ttyl :) .......................... ~ACE~

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, July 3, 2014, Sean Mc Shane (618)By person wrote:

    Dreams are the poetry of the mind. This is a very heartfelt piece. A very deep devotion to someone special. Excellent. Later -

  • Peyton1 On Thursday, July 3, 2014, Peyton1 (181)By person wrote:

    Deep devotion...indeed, the kind that won't go away. I know you can relate to that, and I greatly appreciate your comment. It means allot.................................... ~ACE~

Contribution Level

Poets Bookmarking This Work
Peyton1's Favorite Poets
Peyton1's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post

Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2019 DarkPoetry LLC
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]