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Dark Temptation
By Damon Tarloth
Her evil smile and piercing gaze,
a tragic dark mistake.
An instant pull that we both felt,
my heart I won't forsake...
An instant flash of what I risk,
forever might be lost.
But never going through with this,
could be a greater cost...
I should have turned and walked away,
avoiding loss and pain.
As you can see it's far too late,
the shattered shards remain...
Damon Tarloth
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Copyright 2015 Damon Tarloth
Author's Note:
This is written in Iambic Tetrameter/Iambic Trimeter(Rhyme). So basically 4/3(Rhyme)/4/3 (Rhyme). This is definitely one of the shortest pieces I have ever written...Comments on "Dark Temptation"
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On Wednesday, April 8, 2015, MorganaRose
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wrote:
I know this pull all too well...something you just can't walk away from. The rhyme seems so pure and natural...an impeccable flow.
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On Tuesday, April 21, 2015, Damon Tarloth
(143) wrote:
Thank you for taking the time to not only read my words, but also taking the time to leave some feedback so I could see what others also thought...
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On Tuesday, February 24, 2015, Damon Tarloth
(143) wrote:
Thank you very much :)
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A former member wrote:
Well structured. You should knowledge and discipline in this aside from the poem. Good stuff I enjoy this type of poetry and enjoyed the read.
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