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Death Ryder
By Peyton1
On death's pale wings I glide
Darkest night skies I now ride
Awaiting fears that will soon rise.
Weak mind I've planted a seed
Your soul deserves to be free
Once blinded but now you see.
I must fulfill this inherent lust
Its only passion that I trust
My blade in you deeply thrust.
As innocent blood begins to spill
You succumb quickly to my will
Soon will come ever lasting chill.
The sheets now filled with stain
Of your blood and sweetest pain
My freedom your soul's to gain.
You've been released of life mortal
You may pass through this portal
Here you'll find anything but normal.
What you thought was surely catastrophe
Your body in state of atrophy
You soon realize there's only ecstasy.
Her universe expands so much wider
Sweet release since granted inside her
She forever belongs.....to Death Ryder.
Darkest night skies I now ride
Awaiting fears that will soon rise.
Weak mind I've planted a seed
Your soul deserves to be free
Once blinded but now you see.
I must fulfill this inherent lust
Its only passion that I trust
My blade in you deeply thrust.
As innocent blood begins to spill
You succumb quickly to my will
Soon will come ever lasting chill.
The sheets now filled with stain
Of your blood and sweetest pain
My freedom your soul's to gain.
You've been released of life mortal
You may pass through this portal
Here you'll find anything but normal.
What you thought was surely catastrophe
Your body in state of atrophy
You soon realize there's only ecstasy.
Her universe expands so much wider
Sweet release since granted inside her
She forever belongs.....to Death Ryder.
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Copyright 2015 Peyton1
Published on Tuesday, January 6, 2015.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
multiple meanings intertwined....how many can you findComments on "Death Ryder"
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On Thursday, January 8, 2015, MorganaRose
(75)
wrote:
The dark possession here on several levels is quite enticing. I love the dark twisted writes that you do...they are amazing...consuming.
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On Wednesday, January 7, 2015, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Glad I caught you, since I'm rarely finding time to be here. Hum, lets see. Well, I personally see reflections of, religious undertones combined with music and movies, then a sexual touch near the end with the sweet release inside her. Yet, pale rider will always remind me of Clint Eastwood, but I do get a weird 'sandman' image, that being the reason I said music, and then a little Nicolas Cage imagery. It's quite taxing to try and climb inside someone else's mind for poetic clarity. Poetry is cool for it's layer effect, but I find it quite difficult to actually stick to one internal theme throughout on entire poem. They usually turn out to be a collage effect of personal reflecting. Right on - Ride on !!
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On Wednesday, January 7, 2015, Peyton1
(204) wrote:
Hi miss Kendra! So glad you stopped by, I always love your comments on my works. You nailed down a few aspects of this one for sure....there is also another side with much darker tones, it twisted in nicely when I wrote it so I let it stay. I must get back to your page to see your writings that I've missed out on. Thanks again, talk to you soon. Later cool chick.................................. ~Ace~
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