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Her
By Bloodofdeadpoets
She tortures my soul with the lust in her eyes
And every man’s goal is to be with her so hard he tries
Just to hear her voice many men would give their lives
So in dying they still lose for their goal is never realized
Many men have died for her but she still does not care
Because her heart is stone so she cant shed a single tear
She lives everyday wishing for her life to come to an end
Because she has many lovers but what she wants is a friend
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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Monday, April 28, 2003.
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Comments on "Her"
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A former member wrote:
So true and very emotionally provoking, well done my friend!
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A former member wrote:
you write the truth, some don't notice such things
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A former member wrote:
a nice way to end a poem, very climactic and to end it that way was perfection to the point.
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A former member wrote:
woah, the ending was so unexpected. good job :)
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A former member wrote:
wow the end caught me off guard...i loved it...good write.
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A former member wrote:
fantastic. I love the ending. It was unexpected.
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, xserratedsoulx
(212)
wrote:
i empathize. more true and sad than anything else.
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On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, Enigma
(91) wrote:
THIS IS ANOTHER GOOD WRITE...
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A former member wrote:
its sad, but i know people who are similer. great write, you really captured it without going overboard.
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On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
this is a great write, very touching
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A former member wrote:
im in love with this! nice write
~*raven*~
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On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(242) wrote:
i agree, this was honest with a slap in the face at end. -kitty
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On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, Butterfly
(99) wrote:
Wow this poem just kind of tears at your heart a little bit now doesn't it. So sad. Loved it.
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A former member wrote:
So brutally honest, yet still symphathetic towards the empty shell of a soul. bravo
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A former member wrote:
awesome, and so god damn true!
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On Sunday, September 5, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
After reading this again, I feel I must comment again and tell you how incredible this poem is. So true. You are amazing.
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On Saturday, June 5, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
Damn, this is painfully true for some. exellent write. ..::Rage::...
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A former member wrote:
wow, if I don't know better, I'd think you were writing about me (dont mean to sound conceited, its just, so many live their life that way)
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
this sent shivers uop and down my spine ...this is sad i know the feeling of longing~ss
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On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(91) wrote:
Nice write...I love this write! It's so true and amazing!~GoNe~
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On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
I see this happen everyday...we men never get the hint right away...do we...
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A former member wrote:
wow....-speechless-
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On Wednesday, May 21, 2003, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
beautiful, touching peace. isn't what everyone's looking for? Just a friend...? great work...(!)
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On Monday, May 5, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
Wow, this is a truly amazing piece. You are one of my favorite poets on this site. You have talent!
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
O... my... god. It's like ... you just... i think... You read my mind, saw inside me, wrote what i couldn't bear.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
thanks for the comments, im glad i could write what you couldnt bear liquid thanks for your comment it's greatly appreciated
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On Friday, May 2, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
no darling, YOU are greatly appreciated:)
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A former member wrote:
Fucking Awesome! another great piece!
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