Her

By Bloodofdeadpoets

She tortures my soul with the lust in her eyes

And every man’s goal is to be with her so hard he tries

Just to hear her voice many men would give their lives

So in dying they still lose for their goal is never realized

Many men have died for her but she still does not care

Because her heart is stone so she cant shed a single tear

She lives everyday wishing for her life to come to an end

Because she has many lovers but what she wants is a friend

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Copyright 2003 bloodofdeadpoets
Published on Monday, April 28, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • draco77 On Friday, January 10, 2014, draco77 (7)By person wrote:

    So true and very emotionally provoking, well done my friend!

  • tcdlive On Wednesday, December 26, 2012, tcdlive (7)By person wrote:

    you write the truth, some don't notice such things

  • A former member wrote: a nice way to end a poem, very climactic and to end it that way was perfection to the point.

  • A former member wrote: woah, the ending was so unexpected. good job :)

  • A former member wrote: wow the end caught me off guard...i loved it...good write.

  • A former member wrote: fantastic. I love the ending. It was unexpected.

  • xserratedsoulx On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, xserratedsoulx (214)By person wrote:

    i empathize. more true and sad than anything else.

  • Enigma On Wednesday, April 4, 2007, Enigma (93)By person wrote:

    THIS IS ANOTHER GOOD WRITE...

  • A former member wrote: its sad, but i know people who are similer. great write, you really captured it without going overboard.

  • prettydisgrace On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, prettydisgrace (96)By person wrote:

    this is a great write, very touching

  • A former member wrote: im in love with this! nice write ~*raven*~

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty (253)By person wrote:

    i agree, this was honest with a slap in the face at end. -kitty

  • Butterfly On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, Butterfly (102)By person wrote:

    Wow this poem just kind of tears at your heart a little bit now doesn't it. So sad. Loved it.

  • A former member wrote: So brutally honest, yet still symphathetic towards the empty shell of a soul. bravo

  • A former member wrote: awesome, and so god damn true!

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Sunday, September 5, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (260)By person wrote:

    After reading this again, I feel I must comment again and tell you how incredible this poem is. So true. You are amazing.

  • Beautiful Scars On Saturday, June 5, 2004, Beautiful Scars (200)By person wrote:

    Damn, this is painfully true for some. exellent write. ..::Rage::...

  • A former member wrote: wow, if I don't know better, I'd think you were writing about me (dont mean to sound conceited, its just, so many live their life that way)

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, murder_in_clubland (424)By person wrote:

    this sent shivers uop and down my spine ...this is sad i know the feeling of longing~ss

  • Cwn Annwn On Tuesday, February 3, 2004, Cwn Annwn (93)By person wrote:

    Nice write...I love this write! It's so true and amazing!~GoNe~

  • SilentStalker On Friday, September 26, 2003, SilentStalker (1091)By person wrote:

    I see this happen everyday...we men never get the hint right away...do we... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: wow....-speechless- Scholar

  • hate_doll On Wednesday, May 21, 2003, hate_doll (266)By person wrote:

    beautiful, touching peace. isn't what everyone's looking for? Just a friend...? great work...(!)

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Monday, May 5, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (260)By person wrote:

    Wow, this is a truly amazing piece. You are one of my favorite poets on this site. You have talent!

  • liquid_emotion On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, liquid_emotion (356)By person wrote:

    O... my... god. It's like ... you just... i think... You read my mind, saw inside me, wrote what i couldn't bear.

  • Bloodofdeadpoets On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (56)By person wrote:

    thanks for the comments, im glad i could write what you couldnt bear liquid thanks for your comment it's greatly appreciated

  • liquid_emotion On Friday, May 2, 2003, liquid_emotion (356)By person wrote:

    no darling, YOU are greatly appreciated:)

  • A former member wrote: Fucking Awesome! another great piece!

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