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Comments by hate_doll

"so very, very true! this was set up well, though I couldn't get the "you lose 21 grams when you die and no one know where it goes" from that movie..haha, but it works"
Posted by hate_doll on "May This be a Test to Tarantula Tones and Fevers" by Clementine

"wow..I read this once, then I turned off my music, came back to it and read it out loud..then in my head again. hollowing, you have indeed set the tone vey artfully...wonderful"
Posted by hate_doll on "Coffee Filters The Silence, Poison-esc" by Bella Butchery

"there are imperfections in everything, especially beauty and love...wonderful"
Posted by hate_doll on "she spoke obsidian" by Six-Out

"tragic, but oh so fucking astounding."
Posted by hate_doll on "crumbling.saints [twenty two and ten]" by Six-Out

"there is such musicality to your words..they flow like a river without ever sounding contrived. "sunset sabotage" is my favorite. very very nice."
Posted by hate_doll on "this is romance, on a napkin" by verablue

"absolute perfection"
Posted by hate_doll on "railroads and coastlines" by Six-Out

"in other words, I really adore this."
Posted by hate_doll on "shooting stars with whispered arrows [one thing]" by Six-Out

""It's always about tonight", "the sand like stardust", so many beautiful little lines, so wonderfully working together for the momentum of this piece, which stops you at the edge of a cliff, and then you breathe out."
Posted by hate_doll on "shooting stars with whispered arrows [one thing]" by Six-Out

"I like your use of blank verse..it makes this very elegant and mysterious...deep pangs of sadness will always be offset by regrowth, wonderful our capacity for hope:) lovely write, darling"
Posted by hate_doll on ": phoenix feathers : silver linings :" by NikesRain

""nicotine rusted mind" that's great. And the alliterations that aren't simultaneous really help with the flow..overall I think this is wonderful"
Posted by hate_doll on "When i tried writing about hangovers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"I like it a lot, but I think it would be better if you did away with a few of the cliches like "praying to the porcelain god" and "razorblade smiles" because I think your mind could come up with something much better, like "
Posted by hate_doll on "When i tried writing about hangovers" by Rebel_not_Radical

"I love it's quirkiness, as well. the rhythm and your style is out of this world, I love love love it."
Posted by hate_doll on "eye eye eye" by swing_the_hammer

"yup..brilliance"
Posted by hate_doll on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey

"wonderuflly odd (but totally working) rhythm."
Posted by hate_doll on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"this a hot comment."
Posted by hate_doll on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"unique and penetrating, the language you use makes it whimsically vibrant, though also concrete. plus I love the word subterfuge and major points for incorporating such an awesome word!"
Posted by hate_doll on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey

"I love this, love love love it! it tore the skin right from my back with its fierce images. well done,"
Posted by hate_doll on "sanguine doves" by Cassandra

"hehe, this is very cute and flawless in its sismplicity. "
Posted by hate_doll on "This Walked too Far-off to Become Untitled" by Rebel_not_Radical

":) because i'm so short my granma always used to tell me that small things are bigger treasures. this makes smile, it's a very uplifting and hopefulp piece, it's awesomr"
Posted by hate_doll on "keepsakes & trinkets unseen" by NikesRain

"you have a serpentine mind that is forever tempting"
Posted by hate_doll on "a model on a billboard" by Jonas

"weeeeed, I mean ;)"
Posted by hate_doll on "Blaze" by Jenni

"eyes are cool as hell"
Posted by hate_doll on "The Eye" by l mo

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