Comments by hate_doll

  • "I like it a lot, but I think it would be better if you did away with a few of the cliches like "praying to the porcelain god" and "razorblade smiles" because I think your mind could come up with something much better, like "
    Posted by hate_doll on "When i tried writing about hangovers" by Rebel_not_Radical
  • "unique and penetrating, the language you use makes it whimsically vibrant, though also concrete. plus I love the word subterfuge and major points for incorporating such an awesome word!"
    Posted by hate_doll on "Gold wrapped Memory scorn" by Dancing_Monkey
  • ":) because i'm so short my granma always used to tell me that small things are bigger treasures. this makes smile, it's a very uplifting and hopefulp piece, it's awesomr"
    Posted by hate_doll on "keepsakes & trinkets unseen" by NikesRain
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