Within Your Eyes

By liquid_emotion

I want to breathe you in
Crawl inside your head
Walk around for hours
Exploring thoughts unsaid

I want to taste your fear
And swim inside your eyes
Wrap up in your soul
And feel your anger rise

I want to lick your pain
Bathe in all your tears
Suffocate with memories
You’ve gathered through the years

I want to kiss your depth
And wallow in your sin
Feeling every single thing
You’ve ever felt within

I want to touch your anger
Linger in your pride
Soaking up the hatred
You buried deep inside

I want to smell your secrets
Inhaling all the lies
Relish in contentment
That floats apon your sighs

I want to hear your love
Trail fingers down your dreams
Soak my feet in happiness
Of endless laughter streams

I want to see your turmoil
Get lost inside the lust
Piled up in corners
Collecting passions dust

I want to grasp your innocence
Submerge inside your guilt
Tremble with perceptions
That I have never felt

I want to caress your consciousness
And lay beside your cries
Tremble with your presence
Engulfed within your eyes

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Published on Wednesday, February 26, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Within Your Eyes"

A former member wrote: this piece has moved me. i love your poetry liquid. please do keep writing and posting here. :)
A former member wrote: very nice...very
On Tuesday, March 4, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

That really is a quite excellent piece - you indeed achieved what you were "going for". Ciao, T/S
On Tuesday, March 4, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (1703) wrote:

Now renew you f*&^ing account before you get canceled and we are cheated of the chance to read more of your thoughts. : )
On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

Thank you. I devoured all of your works the first night I stumbled apon them. I was like a starving acholic being fed cough syrup and finding black label in the dusty corner of a hidden shelf!!
On Friday, March 7, 2003, Jonas (720) wrote:

that's excellent simile
On Wednesday, March 5, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

alchoholic*
A former member wrote: just WOW. Excellent work. I could actually "feel" the descriptions as I read them.
On Saturday, March 1, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

EXACTLY what I was going for *bows smiling sheepishly* :) Thank you
On Thursday, February 27, 2003, Psuedonym (2) wrote:

This is an inspired poem, good work.
A former member wrote: Ah....the good and the bad aspects of love twisted around each other in the depths of the soul. The good and the bad....go hand and hand with each other in the discovery of hate in a forgotten reality. Its deep****
A former member wrote: Everyone sees words on love when they read this beautiful piece, it speeks to them in their own special ways. but to truely know the source of such words and my undying love is a gift i'll cherish forever.
On Wednesday, February 26, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

You flatter!! *kiss*
On Wednesday, February 26, 2003, darkness_descends (12) wrote:

Most definitely sums love up to the last detail. Great job I am left in awe. It flowed beautifully. ~Darkness~
On Wednesday, February 26, 2003, Jonas (720) wrote:

ah me (french? blah!) i know what you're saying... but what a dangerous bath to bathe in someone...
On Wednesday, February 26, 2003, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

ahhh love,the things it makes you want to do. bravo very nice, i like...uh
A former member wrote: In sounds like the every part of love. Taking the good with the bad. It was great how in this little poem you've just described everything you can experince in life and love. I liked it.