Comments by Noel Haiasi
- "The nice flow is the first thing I notice and I can relate to the whole religious brainwashing thing as well (my grandparents own a church). Quite the piece you've conjured up here, I enjoyed it thoroughly."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "The Folly of Faith" by Purposelessness
- "Superbly written, there's something about well structured poetry that sates my mind's ravenous appetite and this was no exception. I loved every line, especially "We gave the devil matches, then invited him to stay." Keep it coming friend! "
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "It Burns (villanelle in monorhyme)" by dwells
- "Well, it must be said that this is really well written with tons of clever phrasing. As someone who's experienced this before, it's pretty relatable. Still, if this is what you're currently feeling, try enjoy the little things because that's all that will really get you by sometimes."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Deaths Colourful Sky" by SirEnders
- "I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. "I refer to this state of mindset solely as, Black Licorice. -one word, disgusting. -No two! fucking disgusting."That line made me laugh pretty hard and that doesn't happen very often. Love this piece, very personal. Awesome piece!
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Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Madness Comes in Different Flavors - Final Post" by soul_versing
- "When I read this I noticed it had a distinct flow, kind of like a little song, which I think added to the experience. I also enjoyed your topic, it's relatable and something that I myself have experienced before. All in all a great job, write on."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Mockingbird" by johnbevan17
- "Wow. The flow in this piece is superb. The wording is well thought out and the whole premise of this write is something that I'm sure many can relate to. Write on."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "No Decent Human Being" by Queazenart
- "I really like the concept of this, it's well written and uses very creative lines. I specifically liked the line, "The blinding light captured by a watch is refracted into a rainbow upon the wall of dreams." In total, this was a good write."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Chronometric Prophecy" by quantummysticist18
- "This is a well written piece. My favorite line was, "She has been brainwashed into believing her wealth is her body and not her mind." Only thing I see are a few grammatical errors. Clean it up and you've got an awesome poem."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Neon sex" by beamish
- "I've read many a haiku in my time, but these are top notch. I especially loved the one of innocence and courage. Very moving."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Haikus" by Delphoid-Q
- "I really liked this write. I really did. It was philosophical, it was interesting, and over all well written. The only problem for me is that you rhymed within with within. Rhyming a word with the same word is kind of my pet peeve, but still I don't think that can detract from my enjoyment of this write. "
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "The Man Whom God Forgot" by shadowsinthelight
- "If I was not in class I would have burst into fits of laughter. It is not only funny, but true."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Whores" by Recycled
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